This book packs a lot in for its size!
It's a spice heavy book with fallen angels, nephilim, vampires, witches, lycans, demons and prophecies.
There's a lot of world building and character introductions taking place with a HFN ending and lots of open plot threads to pluck for further stories. As I understand it, this book is going to be a prequel to further stories so I'm hoping those open plot threads will be tied up in the stories to come.
The concept of this book is good and its well written, but for me it left me with a lot of questions and confusion. I had to make notes then go back through the book several times to find my answers and even then some of the questions weren't resolved.
While the story is enjoyable overall, and the spice scenes are on point, for me there were too many unanswered or disjointed parts of the plot that I feel need tidying up. Once they are I think it'll be a really good book.
Below are a few of the unresolved queries I have with the plot:-
Timeline - the book takes place over a 3 week period.
However at the beginning Elek is observing Kiara at the book shop for 4 days and doesn't make a move or approach her. There's no explanation for this. Considering they're desperate to find her, why wait 4 days? They only take her once the Lycans show up and there's a fight.
The bloodstone - is mentioned a lot and seems to have an important role but its use has contradictions. Its supposed to shield her from being found/protect her by muting her powers. Yet later its mentioned her powers are no match for her mates WITHOUT the bloodstone, suggesting she needs it to be more powerful. When the MMCs first take Kiara its suggested only her mates can take it off her, but its never officially confirmed or elaborated on. Later during the Lycan attack on the castle, the MMCs tell Kiara to run and find the bloodstone to keep her safe but the Lycans already found her once with it, they know what she looks like, so what's the point of it being mentioned at all. It seems like it's outlived it's use. I feel like the bloodstone use in the story needs to be tidied up/clarified.
The mating ritual - is mentioned several times throughout the book, that there are steps. However the steps are never clearly defined in the story. They obviously go through them, but you're left to figure it out for yourself.
Ysabel - at one point in the story Ysabel drinks with Kiara. We later find out the wine is spiked with the MMCs blood, to which Ysabel punches one of the MMCs and is mad at them for using her to trick Kiara into drinking it. There's no explanation as to how she realised its spiked (we can only assume its because theyre both drinking it), she also doesnt do anything to stop it and only tells Kiara about it after she's let her drink it. Why didn't she intervene as soon as she knew if shes that upset about it? Its hinted that shes upset due to her own story but never elaborated on. Ysabel is a bold, outspoken character who isnt afraid to stand up to anyone and wants to be Kiara's friend. So this behaviour doesn't seem to fit without further explanation.
Samael - shows up and makes a big fuss over having a party to celebrate them finding their mate. It's suggested he has ulterior motives but nothing comes of that. He leaves, then returns at a later point in time for the party.
During the party he mentions The Rapture, which is not clearly defined, but left for us to assume its the mating ritual. Then he and his Demon party leave abruptly after mentioning it. However the mating ritual ends up taking place over a week later. The timing of the party feels disjointed.
At the end of the party there's a spice scene before the Lycans attack. During the battle Samael and his Demons never appear to help, yet they were at the castle shortly before. They've just disappeared from the story and then Samael reappears in the story when one of the MMCs gets hurt and helps to find the traitor. There's no clarification as to where they were/why they didn't help during the battle, or why Samael is helping to find the traitor. Samael then stays for the beginning of the rescue mission but disappears during it with a cryptic message of having other things to attend to. Again this feels a bit disjointed and needs further clarification (perhaps this will come in the following books).
Magical barrier - During the Lycans attack on the castle there are witches using magic and Kiara can use a little of hers. However, at the beginning of the story there's a magical protection barrier around the castle that prevents magic being used with no mention of the barrier being broken.
Witches - A couple of days after the battle the witches show up at the castle with no explanation on how they found the castle, when it's been mentioned that no one knows the location throughout the story. They then offer to help with the rescue mission and return Kiara to the Nephilim, when throughout the story they have been keeping her hidden from them her entire life. It is clarified that Natalia was planning on revealing Kiara's true story and delivering her to the Nephilim "when the time was right", but considering she only had 3 weeks left to live and Natalia had to explain to her that she had been lied to her whole life...the timing isn't believable.
It's also mentioned the Coven were granted power by Kesebel for protecting Kiara but that story isn't elaborated on - what power? What happens when Kiara dies? Have the Coven been responsible for Kiara throughout each lifetime or just this one? I feel this part of the story needs more fleshing out.
Kiara's lifetimes - Kiara has died multiple times throughout history with her mates having to watch. However her reincarnation process isnt elaborated on, all we are told is that her memories are wiped each time. so it's not clear if her entire body is reincarnated or if its just her soul reappearing throughout history or whether there are any changes that comes with that process. During the explanation from her Mates about how she dies Kiara says "that makes no sense, you're immortal" when they were talking about HER deaths. It does lead to the MMCs talking about how they can die, which is used against them later, but its still a disjointed part of the story and could use some work to flow better.
Mates - while Kiara is Fated to Elek and Matyas. Farkas has his own mate prophecy, which he tries to take Kiara for. While he claims shes his mate as well, he later references her as "Your mate" to one of the MMCs and it's also suggested throughout the story that his true mate is still unfound. This area of the story feels muddy. If he knows she's not his mate then the only reason to take her would be to spite the Nephilim and prevent their prophecy from being fulfilled. There would be no need to attempt to breed her, because he knows it would fail. If she is also his mate then the consequences of her mating with the nephilim need to be clarified. Farkas escaped and they consider him to be a risk to Kiara even after they've completed the bond, so does this mean he can still mate with her? Its suggested Farkas wants to breed an army for a war (an agreement he made with the traitorous witches) and that pups aren't surviving past birth for the last few centuries, yet they haven't gone extinct in this time? I feel this part of the story needs clarification, but perhaps some of these questions will be answered in future stories.
All in all its a fast paced, action packed, spice filled read but I would like to see some more of the plot fleshed out in the future to appease my curious mind.