Ex-DI Genny Hadley has the new life she was longing for, a quiet existence on a beautiful island, but new murder cases just keep finding her...
As her bakery opens for the first time, Genny is starting to enjoy life on a sleepy island off the south coast of England. The residents are coming together to celebrate Christmas just as new vicar Angellica Clementine is instated at Owlwood Vicarage. But during her own Christmas party at the vicarage, Angellica is found dead, slumped against the big Christmas tree at the end of the garden in her red party dress and a dog collar. By her side is a bloodied knife with the Latin Angellus Dei Ultimus. Now Genny and Solent Island's DI Remy Cochran have their work cut out for them in a race against time as the verger's life is threatened and the islanders start to worry that they won't have a Merry Christmas after all...Fans of Death in Paradise, Midsomer Murders, and The Flora Steele Mystery Books will love the second installment in these cozy, witty and fast-paced mysteries!
OMG! I really liked the first book in this series. And I also liked this second entry for most of the book, but couldn't figure out why it was so short (I started seeing 80% completed when I thought I was only about halfway through the book. Well here's how it was so short. The wrap-up of the book was just bullet-points. Seriously? Did someone send the wrong version of the book to Amazon? Or, did they just decide it wasn't worth it and had bullet points (which probably would've been at least 4-5 more chapters). WHAT???? Yes, the final chapter, after everything is solved, was actual words. But this is sloppy, and unacceptable. I really wanted to like this series and hope this one is just a fluke. However, before I read the next in the series I'll check to make certain the author doesn't do the bullet-point thing again.
The author has a good story that gets carried forward to her next book. I am starting book four now. I have one criticism though, she needs to spell check her words as there is quite a few mistakes in how she uses her words in a sentence. Her diction is incorrect in a lot of her sentences. I only wish to draw her attention to this as a helpful tool. I really like her work and want to see this part improved so she can go on to become a better writer.
The story's fine, but the actual writing has clearly not been edited by anyone, including the author, to judge by the number of ridiculous errors in it, the most egregious of which was 'Are you a peeing Tom'. Clearly that should be 'peeping', but apparently no one noticed. I found the same sort of lack of editing in the first book in the series, too, and it's rather irritating that no one appears to have proofread either book.
I was really enjoying this second book in the series, but the ending came so quickly I felt quite cheated! I would have given five stars if the book had been a little longer
I find the several misspelled words and misused words very distracting from the flow from if the story. With today's software, there really is no excuse for these errors.
After reading the 1st book I was looking forward to continuing the series. I was so disappointed to find lots of either editing or print errors which spoiled the flow of reading and then to find an abrupt ending to the story just 96 pages long. Felt very cheated 😢
I was enjoying this book, interesting characters and an intriguing storyline, however I completely agreed with the other reviews. The ending was far too abrupt and the book was overall too short.
This is a new author and a new series for me. I started with book 2, and liked it enough to download books 1, 3, & 4. A clean read which is always a plus and set in the UK which is also an added bonus. Interesting storyline and characters', I read it in one sitting. I am going to now read book 1 and will then have a better feel for the characters. Overall, enjoyable way to spend 2 hours of my day.
Story line was interesting and kept me reading. Almost had to stop because of typos and missed words. Advertisement between chapters 4 and 5 was out of line in my mind. Also end of chapter 8 was bullet points not fully developed. If it was meant to be like that.....I dislike the idea. It appeared as a rush to finish and so shortcut taken . I have started next book (3). We'll hope its all written!
This could have been a good book. However, the author seems to lack basic English skills and gets grammar and whole words wrong. In addition, she couldn’t be bothered to write out what could have been a dramatic and well constructed ending. We are given a weak outline instead. Really poor writing.
As we get to the look last few pages, story descends into descriptive sentences summarizing 5 chapters. Very disconcerting! Story development is sparse but the characters are engaging. Typically repetitive as these series are at the beginning. Whoever. Assembled this for Kindle did author a huge disservice
There were many typographical errors, I.e. misspelling, missing words, and the book was not completed properly. I would not recommend this until it was proofread and corrected. I dislike typos!
Chapters 8 and 9 weren’t even written in sentences. I’m still not sure I understand how or why the murders were committed. This seemed like a good book at first, but it definitely fell apart at the end. Very disappointing.
I was enjoying this storyline until I realized I was almost finished. It seems like the author got tired, wrapped it up in outline form, briefly tied the two main characters closer and said the end.
As usual, it was wonderfully written. It drew you immediately in from the first paragraph, I was not surprised by the ending as I had already guessed that it was Horace who had killed Angellica.
The final chapter summarized the conclusion of the mystery. Literally put the end in paragraphs without any explanation it left many questions unanswered.
I was enjoying the story but the author needs to finish the book. The resolution in bullet points at the end was disappointing and there are a lot of typos.
This book has many errors in spelling, proper English and it is not complete. The final solution is not written in sentences or paragraphs. It needs serious editing.
The story was interesting until the last chapter. The ending needed more details. The book is full of grammar and spelling mistakes. It needs a good ediotor.
Probably would have rated higher but one arrest and the final showdown with the killer were just outline paragraphs. I’m not sure how that got missed in editing.
Poor plot and riddled with spelling and grammatical errors. Ending was dreadful with just a list of bulletin points as though an aide memoir to the writer