Climate Control

by Robert Penfold

Mark Langham, whilst working for the Weather Research Section at N.A.S.A., developed a satellite-based system capable of calming the extremes of weather by influencing the earth’s magnetic field. He got the idea from the changes in the weather seen when electrically charged particles from solar storms hit the field. He could not however, have foreseen the circumstances which now throw the world’s weather into the turmoil "Climate Control" was created to ease. Mark must now regain control of the system....before it is too late.

180 pages, Kindle Edition

First published May 26, 2012

Reviews

[Kath Middleton · Rating 2 out of 5]

This book sounded promising when I read the blurb. A satellite system called Climate Control is protecting areas from the worst weather. There is a terrorist attack, a dreadful storm and a high octane finish. However, I found the style of writing curiously clinical and uninspiring. It was very detached, like reading an instruction manual. Dialogue wasn't very convincing; a married couple spoke to each other as though they were addressing a committee. There was a randomness in the use of apostrophes, particularly in plurals and there were several homophones in use.

It's a good idea but I wasn't convinced by the exectution. I would like to have been made to feel involved in the story and to care more about the characters but I found them all rather bland. It strikes my mind but not my heart.

[Chris Bullock · Rating 3 out of 5]

An interesting concept of weather control continued to its logical conclusion in todays age of terrorism. The story line was sound and parts of it, particularly the storms description, were fully engrossing. Other parts seemed a bit slow at times and suffered due to occasional missed words and some awkward phraseology. It did read as if it would end about three-quarters of the way through, and, although valid, the ending felt as if it had been added on as an afterthought. Nevertheless it was quite enjoyable as a light read.

[Lynne · Rating 3 out of 5]

An interesting and unusual storyline but would have been so much better without the 'wooden' dialogue. The author really needs to work on a more natural conversational flow between the characters.

The Kindle version had a few grammatical errors, particularly with apostrophes, but not enough to spoil the reading experience.

On the whole it had a good plot but was slightly let down by what appears to be the author's inexperience.

[Jules · Rating 5 out of 5]

Very Good. An entertaining read!!

[Carol · Rating 3 out of 5]

Interesting concept and some good bits. Disappointing ending.