Needs an editor, but still fun.
The writing, and more importantly the editing, are still subpar for a published novel series. That said, the characters are engaging, the world building is intriguing, and the super powered punchups are entertaining. So I'm in for book 3, with the hope that the author continues to hone their craft. The only way to improve is to keep writing, and you may as well sell some books while you're at it.