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Calvin Dean’s strong points really shine through in this supernatural suspense novel. His biggest strength is creating characters that you can connect with, and then creating that human connection between the reader and the page. From the plight of a widow or the strength of a little girl fighting her abductor, you genuinely feel for these characters.
The pages fly by, and I don’t think I’m out of line comparing his writing style to a Dean Koontz. I wouldn’t classify it as horror, but some scenes are in fact horrific. Thankfully Calvin Dean gives these things the weight they deserve, while not going into details. After all, your own imagination is probably much worse than anything he could write. These come across in quotes like this from Lydia:
I’m sorry, Momma. I didn’t wantto do it. When he was through, he handed me my pajamas. I put the gown on. Now I smell like him.
It not only derives a ton of sympathy for the daughter, it creates so much loathing and hatred into Bobby Ray’s character at the same time, you wish him serious harm.
On the flip side of the fantastic characters is the plot line. While the plot is engaging, and this being a supernatural type of story, you do have to suspend your disbelief some, I found a lot of the actions of the characters just completely un-realistic. From reporters to cops, things just didn’t add up, and they didn’t act in very realistic fashions. It served the purpose of moving the story along, but there are times where I just had to put the book down and kind of roll my eyes.
The other issue I had, and is another reason I compare this to a Dean Koontz book, is the ending. You have all of these events in place, the kidnapping of the daughter where they don’t know where she is, Eric contacting his wife from beyond the grave, and the unraveling of the corruption from a Senator all trying to be tied up. They way the book ended, it was impossible to be written into a corner. No matter what happened, it could, and did all become resolved via a sort of Deus Ex Machina. In my opinion, this knocked the book down quite a bit. The build up was fantastic, the characters, were absolutely fantastic, and I think the characters deserved a better ending.
The Bottom Line: An extremely strong setup and well rounded characters were tainted by a very sub-par ending in my opinion. While the book could rank right up there with some of Dean Koontz’s works from the early 2000′s, I felt let down. It was aiken to a strong story, with the twist of “and he woke up, it was all a dream.” I still look forward to any other novel Calvin Dean writes, because he knows how to write strong characters, I just hope that the ending of the next one will be a bit tighter.