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Soul Ties #1
Bonded
Zisa Daroh thought she has found the man she wanted to spend the rest of her life with. There is just one problem, not only has he refused to have sex with her, but he has also dumped her.
Distraught and over come with grief, she runs to the nearest shoulder to cry on. It happens to belong to his best friend.
In love with both men, she struggles to make sense out of her life in their absence when suddenly they ask to share her.
Will she agree? And allow both men to have her virginity as well?
Distraught and over come with grief, she runs to the nearest shoulder to cry on. It happens to belong to his best friend.
In love with both men, she struggles to make sense out of her life in their absence when suddenly they ask to share her.
Will she agree? And allow both men to have her virginity as well?
- GenresMenage
46 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 23, 2013
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Peyton Brittany Clarke
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September 10, 2014
Filled with atrocious editing mistakes.
Editing mistakes that confused the reader on who's POV is being read.
Kindle location 131
To love both men, best friends, was a costly mistake. that date made in the cantina blossomed into a wonderful romance, which Kellam quickly dropped after realizing he'd be unabble to nurture it fully. During your final date, his exact words were, "My work will not allow me to give you the life you deserved." And he left.
= Am I the only one who got confused who was talking in this paragraph? This kind of mistake happened more than once in the book.
Another editing mistake is a sentence starts in paragraph one only to be cut in the middle and on to paragraph 2 starts with the next word of the same sentence. This same chaos is everywhere on the book.
Then let's talk about the story itself. The erotica part aside, there are a lot of issues that was mentioned that remained unresolved and left hanging on the end. Like their living arrangement since the h was adamant she will go back to her work far away from the place of work of the 2 H. Also the mystery of the mentioned future child that the h seemed oblivious that one of the H's 'boss' claimed ownership - and the heroine did not even bat an eye. And a lot more which in the end made me care less for the characters in the book thus making the book a forgettable read.
I would think twice before picking up this author's other books.
Editing mistakes that confused the reader on who's POV is being read.
Kindle location 131
To love both men, best friends, was a costly mistake. that date made in the cantina blossomed into a wonderful romance, which Kellam quickly dropped after realizing he'd be unabble to nurture it fully. During your final date, his exact words were, "My work will not allow me to give you the life you deserved." And he left.
= Am I the only one who got confused who was talking in this paragraph? This kind of mistake happened more than once in the book.
Another editing mistake is a sentence starts in paragraph one only to be cut in the middle and on to paragraph 2 starts with the next word of the same sentence. This same chaos is everywhere on the book.
Then let's talk about the story itself. The erotica part aside, there are a lot of issues that was mentioned that remained unresolved and left hanging on the end. Like their living arrangement since the h was adamant she will go back to her work far away from the place of work of the 2 H. Also the mystery of the mentioned future child that the h seemed oblivious that one of the H's 'boss' claimed ownership - and the heroine did not even bat an eye. And a lot more which in the end made me care less for the characters in the book thus making the book a forgettable read.
I would think twice before picking up this author's other books.
September 8, 2013
So many mistakes, it made the story almost unreadable.
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