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Ravaged By the Raptor
Warning: This is a tale of monster sex. This story was written to unlock your darkest fantasies and innermost desires. It is not for the faint of heart and is not your mother’s erotica. All of the sexual descriptions found in this book are very explicit in nature. It’s not suitable for someone under 18 years of age. Read at your own risk.
Paola was the first born in her family, and by the laws of her country, would receive a free education at the university located in the capital. However, her family decides to send her eldest brother, one year her junior, in her stead. She’s outraged by her father’s decision, but has little choice in the matter.
The beautiful, buxom girl must now tend the farm like the rest of her family, feeding the animals, tending the crops, and protecting their land from hungry predators, like foxes, wolves, and the occasional dinosaur.
Life is absolutely bland until Paola comes face to face with a velociraptor! She thinks the beast will leap at her and tear her flesh with its powerful claws. However, the creature has more carnal desires that it wishes to fulfill.
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Paola was the first born in her family, and by the laws of her country, would receive a free education at the university located in the capital. However, her family decides to send her eldest brother, one year her junior, in her stead. She’s outraged by her father’s decision, but has little choice in the matter.
The beautiful, buxom girl must now tend the farm like the rest of her family, feeding the animals, tending the crops, and protecting their land from hungry predators, like foxes, wolves, and the occasional dinosaur.
Life is absolutely bland until Paola comes face to face with a velociraptor! She thinks the beast will leap at her and tear her flesh with its powerful claws. However, the creature has more carnal desires that it wishes to fulfill.
Words: 5,000
38 pages, Nook
First published May 24, 2013
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October 1, 2018poor paola. on her planet, it is customary for the eldest child to become the representative of the family and go to college, getting to leave home and escape into the wide world. unfortunately, she must not have applied herself enough, because her younger brother got the better grades, and was chosen to go instead, leaving paola stuck on the old farm, mucking out animal stalls and protecting the livestock from… dinosaurs. yep. dinosaurs.
paola had always assumed she would be getting out, so she never spent much time doing the dirty work, and now she is wicked pissed. she gets in a fight with her brother, mocking his lack of sexual experience and his looks, and he returns the favor with these fighting words:
"Go fuck a raptor," he retorted, retreating to the boys bedroom.
so, one day, after crappy sex with her human lover, paola goes out to feed the chickens but oh noes!
all the chickens have been eated! even worse, the predator is still in the henhouse. DID YOU GUESS IT WAS A DINOSAUR???
and then paola "unwillingly" does what her brother has suggested she do.
On her hands and knees in the dirt, with a raptor trying to mount her she felt sexually animalistic herself. Paola maintained her position deciding she would let the dinosaur dictate the course of events. After all, she could always say she was too frightened to move or attempt an escape given the raptor's savage reputation. In truth was she was keen to see where it would go.
i am pretty sure we all know where it is going to go. right?? anyone?
it goes in a lot of places. and at first she is well into it, but then it all becomes a little dull. poor, jaded paola.
Initially, it had been fun, but physically, she wasn't built to endure this type of mating. The creature was already back and trying to mount her.She rolled her eyes wondering how best to end the sex.
well, it's not like we can't relate, right? we have all planned our exits in our minds, just not usually with a dinosaur.
but paola is game; she administers a "Jurassic blow job" to keep the spice in their relationship, but then it all goes wrong again and the raptor, in his eagerness and innocence of human female anatomy, crashes in through the out door.
paola is a too-forgiving lass.
The accidental anal invasion didn't deter Paola from wanting the raptor in her.
but even still,
well, okay, it is going to have one kind of happy ending
but as for the raptor…. well, paola is kind of a vengeful girl, a love 'em and leave 'em type. and it all ends very poorly for the raptor, unfortunately. so, it is a very sad monsterotica. don't read this one if you believe in happy ever after and the power of love to overcome all obstacles. because it just doesn't.
sorry, little guy.
come to my blog!
paola had always assumed she would be getting out, so she never spent much time doing the dirty work, and now she is wicked pissed. she gets in a fight with her brother, mocking his lack of sexual experience and his looks, and he returns the favor with these fighting words:
"Go fuck a raptor," he retorted, retreating to the boys bedroom.
so, one day, after crappy sex with her human lover, paola goes out to feed the chickens but oh noes!
all the chickens have been eated! even worse, the predator is still in the henhouse. DID YOU GUESS IT WAS A DINOSAUR???
and then paola "unwillingly" does what her brother has suggested she do.
On her hands and knees in the dirt, with a raptor trying to mount her she felt sexually animalistic herself. Paola maintained her position deciding she would let the dinosaur dictate the course of events. After all, she could always say she was too frightened to move or attempt an escape given the raptor's savage reputation. In truth was she was keen to see where it would go.
i am pretty sure we all know where it is going to go. right?? anyone?
it goes in a lot of places. and at first she is well into it, but then it all becomes a little dull. poor, jaded paola.
Initially, it had been fun, but physically, she wasn't built to endure this type of mating. The creature was already back and trying to mount her.She rolled her eyes wondering how best to end the sex.
well, it's not like we can't relate, right? we have all planned our exits in our minds, just not usually with a dinosaur.
but paola is game; she administers a "Jurassic blow job" to keep the spice in their relationship, but then it all goes wrong again and the raptor, in his eagerness and innocence of human female anatomy, crashes in through the out door.
paola is a too-forgiving lass.
The accidental anal invasion didn't deter Paola from wanting the raptor in her.
but even still,
well, okay, it is going to have one kind of happy ending
but as for the raptor…. well, paola is kind of a vengeful girl, a love 'em and leave 'em type. and it all ends very poorly for the raptor, unfortunately. so, it is a very sad monsterotica. don't read this one if you believe in happy ever after and the power of love to overcome all obstacles. because it just doesn't.
sorry, little guy.
come to my blog!
October 31, 2019
The Annual Halloween Monster Sex Gangbang begins!!!
I knew things were gonna go wrong when Paola's brother, in anger, yelled at her to,
What a very interesting story of beautiful, young Paola, the first born to a family of farmers. The setting for this book is on a planet that in inhabited by Dinosaurs. Their farm is surrounded by tall electric fences that keep the predators out.
The first born of each family is guaranteed a free college education, provided by the government. And Paola has been dreaming of getting off this farm and making something more of herself. Only mom and dad have other plans. They intend to send her brother and have her manage the farm. The farm that she Hates!!!
Paola gets a little horny and calls her ex "hook up" over for a little action. There is all kinds of foreshadowing in this book that makes it a little predictable. Like the mentioning of how the electric gate HAS to be left on at all times to keep the dinosaurs out!!!
Paola comes back from her trist unsatisfied and in deep shit with dad for not feeding the animals. As she steps out of the bloodied and ravaged chicken coup, she hears a sound that could only be a Velociraptor!!!
Only this raptor has had his fill of chicken....now, he is in the mood for LOVE!!!
So ask yourself, if you were in this situation, What Would You Do?
Any of the Above options would be what Paola chose. But don't judge her...
Raptors are intelligent and skilled in the art of seduction...
If you were hoping for a Dinosaur Love Match with a HEA. You can forget it!!! Cause this is Monster Sex!!!
You'll have to read this one for yourself to see how it all ends
My Favorite Quote from this book:
4.25 Kinky Jurassic Stars
This Recommendation came just in time to kick start my
Annual Halloween Monster Sex Gangbang Challenge!!!
Thanks Shelley
This Halloween Monster Sex Gangbang Challenge continues with...
The Goblin Between Her Thighs
I knew things were gonna go wrong when Paola's brother, in anger, yelled at her to,
"Go fuck a raptor"
What a very interesting story of beautiful, young Paola, the first born to a family of farmers. The setting for this book is on a planet that in inhabited by Dinosaurs. Their farm is surrounded by tall electric fences that keep the predators out.
The first born of each family is guaranteed a free college education, provided by the government. And Paola has been dreaming of getting off this farm and making something more of herself. Only mom and dad have other plans. They intend to send her brother and have her manage the farm. The farm that she Hates!!!
Paola gets a little horny and calls her ex "hook up" over for a little action. There is all kinds of foreshadowing in this book that makes it a little predictable. Like the mentioning of how the electric gate HAS to be left on at all times to keep the dinosaurs out!!!
Perhaps because she'd been raised with animals, Paola easily accepted animals, including people, had natural base desires. Fucking was normal and natural...
Paola comes back from her trist unsatisfied and in deep shit with dad for not feeding the animals. As she steps out of the bloodied and ravaged chicken coup, she hears a sound that could only be a Velociraptor!!!
Only this raptor has had his fill of chicken....now, he is in the mood for LOVE!!!
It was clumsy but keen in its exploration. As it crept higher ...she realized the dinosaur was trying to mate with her
So ask yourself, if you were in this situation, What Would You Do?
Any of the Above options would be what Paola chose. But don't judge her...
Raptors are intelligent and skilled in the art of seduction...
If you were hoping for a Dinosaur Love Match with a HEA. You can forget it!!! Cause this is Monster Sex!!!
You'll have to read this one for yourself to see how it all ends
My Favorite Quote from this book:
The last thing she needed was her entire clan appearing to witness what was probably the filthiest and kinkiest sex act she'd been part of.
4.25 Kinky Jurassic Stars
This Recommendation came just in time to kick start my
Annual Halloween Monster Sex Gangbang Challenge!!!
Thanks Shelley
This Halloween Monster Sex Gangbang Challenge continues with...
The Goblin Between Her Thighs
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October 3, 2013I was recommended this by a dear friend. And as soon as I finish, I plan to return the favor.
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January 5, 2015
What was I thinking?!
Had some serious doubts before adding this to my "Read", but hey, one closer to the 2015 Challenge count, amirite?
Paid $1.22 for this. I regret everything.
Since I first noticed the entire collection of Christie Sim's literature, which such classics as "Taken by the T-Rex" or "Ravished by the Triceratops", I have been curious as hell. And a little bit freaked out. Okay... HELLUVA freaked out.
But tonight I finally managed to see what all this batshit crazy stuff is about. And it was horrible. You thought "50 shades" was bad? Try this!
I will go cry myself to sleep now.
Curiosity almost killed the Cat(herine).
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October 29, 2013Who needs Josh Lanyon and Sarah Black when you can read this?
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October 17, 2014Yeah, I read it. A book about a girl that gets fucked by a dinosaur. That is this. That's what this is about. And I knew that, going in. That's what I wanted to read: a short, undoubtedly low-brow monster-sex story. Then hows come I feel so unfulfilled?
Am I getting too old for mere sensationalism and bawdiness to entertain me any longer? I hope that's not the case. My internet browsing history will, at least, argue that it's not ME.
Seriously, this should have been either pretty hot, kinda funny, or both. It was neither. This chick doesn't like farming. She doesn't like the way her semi-boyfriend fucks her. So when she find an alien velociraptor in the chicken coop, she lets it fuck her amongst the feathery corpses of hens. Like you do.
But there was no sexiness to it. No humor. Nothing but this stupid bitch getting horny for reptilian wang when she should have been fearing for her life.
It must be me. This was supposed to be mindless, and I went in looking for something. A smile, a grudging erection, SOMETHING. It failed to deliver.
I'll give this dumb thing one compliment, though: kudos for the author spelling it "cum" instead of "come." Because it's fucking cum, man. Cum.
Am I getting too old for mere sensationalism and bawdiness to entertain me any longer? I hope that's not the case. My internet browsing history will, at least, argue that it's not ME.
Seriously, this should have been either pretty hot, kinda funny, or both. It was neither. This chick doesn't like farming. She doesn't like the way her semi-boyfriend fucks her. So when she find an alien velociraptor in the chicken coop, she lets it fuck her amongst the feathery corpses of hens. Like you do.
But there was no sexiness to it. No humor. Nothing but this stupid bitch getting horny for reptilian wang when she should have been fearing for her life.
It must be me. This was supposed to be mindless, and I went in looking for something. A smile, a grudging erection, SOMETHING. It failed to deliver.
I'll give this dumb thing one compliment, though: kudos for the author spelling it "cum" instead of "come." Because it's fucking cum, man. Cum.
May 9, 2022
Someone should have stopped me
October 23, 2013
In reading the news regarding the re-casting of Christian Grey in the 50 Shades of Gray movie, I came across an article (on MTV.com I believe) about other erotic books to read while awaiting the movie to come out that listed this series. I thought to myself "Really, How is that possible. OMG my curiousity has been peaked. I need to figure this out." So I picked up this book (more like short story) and OMFG WHAT DID I READ! Plot is terrible (but really what did you expect), sex scene was ridiculous and graphic (VERY VERY GRAPHIC), so many grammatical/formatting/typographical errors. Over all this was horrible, HORRIBLY AWESOME! I lol'd and blushed and couldn't stop myself from say WTF did I just read, so I bought the next one, and the next one, and the next one, 7 dinosaur erotica "books" in total. They are terrible, hysterical, graphic, and amazing all in one. I branched out to the author's Dragon and Werewolf stories, those are just terrible. I'm almost ashamed to say I enjoyed these, but I did, and I actually am ashamed. I don't recommend to anyone, that would be way to embarrassing. I didn't even want to list them, but I'm trying to track everything I read. So DON'T READ THIS BOOK! AND DON'T SEARCH MY READ LIST AND SEE HOW MANY OF THEM I'VE ACTUALLY READ!
not-going-there
October 5, 2013Should have been titled "Rapture With A Raptor"...
December 3, 2022
Honestly unsure how you make a dino smut story about a raptor boring, but here we are. While this one is tedious and kind of goes nowhere, I will say there are other novelettes about Jurassic erotica from the author that are entertaining and more put together (for me, anyway). Ravaged By the Raptor is just not one I would consider again. Sadly. *hums the Jurassic Park theme song while crying*
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October 4, 2021The Flintstones with overwrought politics, and then she gets fucked by a raptor. No buildup. It just sort of happens. Oh, and the phrase “Jurassic blow job” is used, so that was neat. I didn’t know there could be a way to make “dinosaur erotica” excruciatingly boring, but here we are.
Favorite quote:
“Sex earlier with Wyatt had been a complete non-event; however, she couldn't ever see experiencing a dinosaur cock classified as a non-event.”
Favorite quote:
“Sex earlier with Wyatt had been a complete non-event; however, she couldn't ever see experiencing a dinosaur cock classified as a non-event.”
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 15, 2013
Disclaimer: This was a joke buddy read so all my goodreads friends should not judge me too harshly. LOL
I knew what to expect getting into it so it's unfair to give it less than 3 stars. This is begging for a better review and when I have time I'll give details. LOL
I knew what to expect getting into it so it's unfair to give it less than 3 stars. This is begging for a better review and when I have time I'll give details. LOL
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October 13, 2013This gets no stars....What did I just read?? The main reason I took up this book was for research purposes for my weekly podcast...I can't believe stuff like this exists....
September 25, 2023
I have no words for how weird this one was. LMAO this book was really boring on top of being super weird.
October 10, 2023
I have no words.
October 23, 2013
The title says it all.
Literally.
Literally.
November 3, 2020
I don't know why I'm still reading these. Lol. I mean, who thinks these things up.
January 31, 2023
Don't judge me it was a dare 😂
March 10, 2025
This is definitely one of the wildest dinosaur erotica so have read. After her brother sarcastically tells her to go fuck a raptor, our main character does just that and mayhem ensues.
September 23, 2014
So I got curious... :-)
In case you haven't picked up on it, Christie Sims and Alara Branwen have made a name for themselves by writing 'monster erotica'. After having stumbled unto a second article talking about them I just had to take a bite out of their collection.
So my impressions... we'll it isn't as bad as I had expected, not that it's hard to top those.
Good story, good world building and for a novella at least the female main character had some depth to her, even if she was a bit too stereotypical for my taste.
...and to squeeze in a twist at the end was a clear plus.
In case you haven't picked up on it, Christie Sims and Alara Branwen have made a name for themselves by writing 'monster erotica'. After having stumbled unto a second article talking about them I just had to take a bite out of their collection.
So my impressions... we'll it isn't as bad as I had expected, not that it's hard to top those.
Good story, good world building and for a novella at least the female main character had some depth to her, even if she was a bit too stereotypical for my taste.
...and to squeeze in a twist at the end was a clear plus.
September 3, 2015
read it out loud to your lover dramatically asap
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