Chocolate Brown 2

Chocolate Brown #2

by Coco Mixon

Chocolate Brown is no longer your naive young teenager. She's over eighteen and finding her voice. After the passing of her dad, she and her two siblings pull away from the world and discover each other. Once her sister Pepper reveals the secrets their dad entrusted her with, the game changes. Time has passed and things have changed. Chocolate's innocence is diminishing. Learning about her new siblings and dealing with the lies her family fed her, has hardened her, and opened up a whole new light inside of her. As Chocolate, Carlos and Pepper deal with the death of their father they are faced with more illnesses and more deaths. Will new siblings come into play? How will this all play out? Is Pepper really who she says she is? Come take a journey with the Brown siblings as they develop a bond that cannot be broken and open a wrath of fury on anyone who crosses them.

Kindle Edition

First published April 18, 2013

About the author

Coco Mixon was born in Compton, California. She grew up in multiple cities in Los Angeles County mainly Lynwood, Compton, and North Long Beach. Her passion for writing came in the third grade.

Reviews

[Therese · Rating 5 out of 5]

Can't wait for part 3

[Rebecca · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great continuation from book one. The Brown children are a force to be reckon with. Really enjoyed the book. Can't wait till the next one. Would recommend.

[Keke Chanel · Rating 4 out of 5]

What the hell?! This book keeps you entertained from start to finish. The ending left me wanting more. What happens next? Great job again Coco!!!

[LaTanya Garry · Rating 5 out of 5]

WOW

Chocolate and Carlos find out more news about their father can not believe all the secret's and lies. When tragedy strikes. It brings out the beast in them along with their other siblings Pepper and Butta.

[Tanielle · Rating 1 out of 5]

Honestly there are so many problems with this I'm sure many have already pointed them out. The biggest problem is the shifting perspective of who is telling the story. Also the consistent problem of going in and out of past tense when it reads as if it's happening at the moment. I get the editing and all that but if you're not a big time author the cost for professional editing can get expensive. Especially for free books and short stories.

That's no excuse but I can get over it and see that the story itself with all its flaws can actually be good if the author took her time and sequenced it out. The flow is off in many parts and the pace is fast so you don't get a chance to connect with the characters. It's almost as if its a rough draft and it's waiting for the detail and cleanup. I do think if the author was a better story teller on paper it would be a good read all together. Again its free so I'll read the next one but I know even if these are just a dollar after this one I wouldn't be.

[Ms. T. Nicole · Rating 5 out of 5]

Gotta be mo careful!

woah... this was a banger and that ending tho , it was like a movie being played out in my head. I loved every moment of the book, especially the siblings bond, I just hope they can get choc out of that sticky situation

[MzAngie B · Rating 5 out of 5]

I read this in less that 3 hrs and I must stay I'm so hooked, very impressive story line and I'm ready to see the outcome....

[Valarie · Rating 5 out of 5]

OMG

This is getting good. This is a must read. It have you wanting more and more trust me you going to love it

[Mirrlees · Rating 4 out of 5]

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh she got caught what are they gonna do. Aww well on to part 3 to see what happens.

[Deidre · Rating 5 out of 5]

love this book great book 2