I've just finished reading March of the Cogsmen, the eighth installment in Michael Coorlim's Galvanic Century series. This is a short novel, compared to the previous episodes, which were nevelettes. Still it makes for fast reading, and I've found myself enjoying it as much as I did the shorter ones.
I'd rather start my review with those aspects I didn't like. Fortunately, for me these are very minor, and are a number of typos and formatting defects in my electronic copy of the book. While not very important, I think that more care should be taken, since these flaws can be off-putting to some readers.
Aside from that, the book is quite enjoyable, just like Coorlim's previous efforts. Again, since it's quite short, the action is fast and the plot develops quickly. Of course, that could be seen as a lacking depth, as I commented in my review of the previous stories, but form my point of view that is not so. In fact, one of the strengths of March of the Cogsmen is in the department of character development, more of which later.
The book ties together the two collections of Galvanic Century books, the Adventures of Bartleby and James and Chronicles of a Gentlewoman, with the wedding of Alton Bartleby and Aldora Fiske. Suffice to say that the wedding will not proceed exactly as expected, since an old enemy will make an appearance; saying anything else would need spoilers, and I like a spoiler-free review as much as the next person.
During the first part of the book, Bartleby comes across like an insensitive, selfish ass. That got me worried, since nothing like it had been glimpsed in the novelettes. In contrast, Aldora quickly changes before our eyes, becoming more human. And even James is given some treatment regarding his feelings, which I liked to see; it seems to me James is quite downplayed in the stories, and this was a welcome change.
Nevertheless, the change in Bartleby does arrive, and indeed when it does we're halfway into the action. He's seen to be his usual, intelligent self, plus having quite a gift for treating people, even though in a most peculiar way. And he's also revealed as a talented tactician. For her part, Aldora is developed even further, a trend that I hope will continue in the following novels; and I don't mean that she must become weaker, but instead less strict, specially with herself.
If I liked the way the main characters were handled, the supporting cast and the larger background plans did not let me down, either. I expected the book to expand on the universe of the Galvanic Century that Coorlim has created, and it delivers, albeit in subtle ways. The plot connects directly to previous stories by means of the villain; there are some not so unexpected revelations, and glimpses of things to come, including larger threats both from outside and, shall we say, inside.
Just like I said in my earlier review, I especially like Coorlim's books because I can see how deeply he loves his work, and how he improves with each effort. He still seems to have the impulse of the new writer, and I appreciate that. However, the fact remains of the small formatting details that have to be accounted for in the next books. I for one cannot wait to read them. A great job, and an enjoyable one.