Tangled Dreams

by Jennifer Anderson

Madison McKnight was an ordinary girl. An ordinary girl that lost her father to a drunk driver at the tender age of sixteen. Soon after, she was thrust into a life that she had no intentions of staying in by a mother that was much to enthusiastic to dump her on to anyone. From that moment on she would never know what ordinary was ever again. Growing up, Madison knew nothing of her father's family and now she was going to have to live with them. Upon her arrival, she found out just exactly what her Uncle William really thought of her mother. To Madison's bewilderment he held much of this same detest and hostility towards her. She was then surprised and found her life would never be the same after she met handsome, brooding Gavin. As young love fills the air, the secret of Gavin being adopted was starting to take center stage. This fact did not seem to matter to her due to the reasoning that she refused to be put into the same light as her mother. Madison soon derails in her attempt to forget Gavin and starts dating fellow classmate Clay. He is rich, popular and the quarterback of the football team. One problem, he isn't Gavin.

This is book one of the Tangled series. Book two "Tangled Future" is out on Amazon now.

313 pages, Kindle Edition

First published December 31, 2012

About the author

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Reviews

[Dianne · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was such a great story. It is about Madison/Maddie, who loses her father and goes to live with her Uncle and his family. She falls in love with her Uncle's son Gavin, which is the start of this heartbreaking story. I could not stop crying throughout the whole book. The end of the book left me completely heartbroken with tears streaming down my face. It is just simply amazing. I did have a few problems with it though. First off the grammar in this book was horrendous. There were so many spelling mistakes and lack of punctuation. Sometimes I didn't know if they were having a conversation or I was reading an internal monologue. I also had a problem with the narration. The POV's would jump from Maddie to Gavin to sometimes Clay and I wouldn't even know it. It would have been better if there was a separation from each side of the story. I had difficulty with knowing who was speaking in the story. Although the grammar, punctuation, and narrative took away from the story, it didn't completely ruin it. The story in itself was great and therefore made up for the errors. If the error were fixed the book would have been the best. I still highly recommend this book to read for the plot.

[Tyf]

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[Salomé Michalowski · Rating 5 out of 5]

I laughed a lot. I loved how I wanted to strangle and hug Grew all at the same time. I loved how the story was told by him talking to us readers!

[Lindsey]

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[Elida · Rating 2 out of 5]

2.5