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A Twist in Time
Mystery Hill, an ancient stone circle in New Hampshire, is a place of legend and its true purpose has all but been lost with the passage of time.
Roger Grayson is less than a week away from marrying Lisa Barnet when the unthinkable happens, and she is torn away from him in a fatal car accident.
A year later, when Roger reluctantly gives in to pressure from his best friend to get out of the house, he is surprised to find an interest in what Richard Adahy, the enigmatic Indian caretaker of Mystery Hill, has to say about the folklore surrounding the circle...and the behavior of the Indian's peculiar pet crow, Percy. Richard's antiquated stories turn Roger's despair for his lost love into a fraught hope.
With the autumn equinox fast approaching, Roger decides to push away his friend's warnings to stay clear of Richard and his mystical hill, and travel back in time to seize the only chance he has of saving Lisa's life.
(Revised printing of ISBN: 978-1481885379)
Roger Grayson is less than a week away from marrying Lisa Barnet when the unthinkable happens, and she is torn away from him in a fatal car accident.
A year later, when Roger reluctantly gives in to pressure from his best friend to get out of the house, he is surprised to find an interest in what Richard Adahy, the enigmatic Indian caretaker of Mystery Hill, has to say about the folklore surrounding the circle...and the behavior of the Indian's peculiar pet crow, Percy. Richard's antiquated stories turn Roger's despair for his lost love into a fraught hope.
With the autumn equinox fast approaching, Roger decides to push away his friend's warnings to stay clear of Richard and his mystical hill, and travel back in time to seize the only chance he has of saving Lisa's life.
(Revised printing of ISBN: 978-1481885379)
- GenresTime Travel
188 pages, Paperback
First published January 1, 2013
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About the author
E.G. Glover
7 books26 followersE G Glover began his indie author writing career with The Fear Series (Paranormal Romance), which is written and published with co-author, L R Barrett-Durham.
A year later, Glover released his first solo novella, A Twist In Time (Time Travel Gothic/Romance), which has sold in several countries around the world.
Glover flirted with idea of writing in high school by authoring various poems and short stories, but it wasn't until recently that his dream of writing a novel became a reality.
Born and raised in northwest Alabama, Glover hopes his writing will prove a romantic story can be told with a male's point of view entwined, and still hold its romanticism.
Chat with him on Facebook at https://www.facebook.com/egglover76.
A year later, Glover released his first solo novella, A Twist In Time (Time Travel Gothic/Romance), which has sold in several countries around the world.
Glover flirted with idea of writing in high school by authoring various poems and short stories, but it wasn't until recently that his dream of writing a novel became a reality.
Born and raised in northwest Alabama, Glover hopes his writing will prove a romantic story can be told with a male's point of view entwined, and still hold its romanticism.
Chat with him on Facebook at https://www.facebook.com/egglover76.
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July 22, 2015
A quick and enjoyable read! An interesting take on time travel which didn't have a sappy cookie-cutter ending that's often the case with books about a quest for a lost love.
June 17, 2015
I bought this book as a sort of impulse buy, when at a convention I heard about a book about time travel. I bought it from none other than the author himself, who was a wonderful person and actually went so far as to sign it for me for no extra charge. His actions gave me high hopes about this novel, but when I finally got around to reading it, it wasn't as great as I'd hoped.
I immediately noticed that it haf some very strange formatting; for example, the majority of the paragraphs were only one to three sentences, and none of these paragraphs were ever split for the sake of filling up the page. I would see a third of the page blank, think that the chapter is over (as occurs with most books,) then turn the page and see that the scene still continues for a little while. I believe this is because of the already small page number (180), but it made for a fairly unimmersive experience.
Along with that, the story was fairly choppy due to its frequent small chapters. There were several times where I had to look past many of the details of the story just to figure out what was going on. The plot, while very detail-oriented, lacked detail at crucial points (like characters' actions) and had way too much at other times (like specific cars, songs, food places, etc).
As far as the characters go, I wasn't able to connect very well with any of them. They all seemed too similar to me; for example, I would think that an ancient Indian man would act differently than an impulsive twenty-something-year-old man. And on the subject of impulsiveness, it makes me almost angry to see how little Roger actually thought about and planned out what he needed to do while in the past. Sure, he .ade a couple decisions beforehand, but those inevitably went up in smoke due to his own emotions. It might be the grief, in which case that could be partially excused, or it could just be that his character is too flighty to actually get anything productive done.
tl;dr: The idea of a romance told from a man's perspective laced with time travel is an interesting concept, but it wasn't executed too well. Mr. Glover should have gotten beta readers to read it before self-publishing. While I am glad that I've read this, I wouldn't want to read it again very soon.
I immediately noticed that it haf some very strange formatting; for example, the majority of the paragraphs were only one to three sentences, and none of these paragraphs were ever split for the sake of filling up the page. I would see a third of the page blank, think that the chapter is over (as occurs with most books,) then turn the page and see that the scene still continues for a little while. I believe this is because of the already small page number (180), but it made for a fairly unimmersive experience.
Along with that, the story was fairly choppy due to its frequent small chapters. There were several times where I had to look past many of the details of the story just to figure out what was going on. The plot, while very detail-oriented, lacked detail at crucial points (like characters' actions) and had way too much at other times (like specific cars, songs, food places, etc).
As far as the characters go, I wasn't able to connect very well with any of them. They all seemed too similar to me; for example, I would think that an ancient Indian man would act differently than an impulsive twenty-something-year-old man. And on the subject of impulsiveness, it makes me almost angry to see how little Roger actually thought about and planned out what he needed to do while in the past. Sure, he .ade a couple decisions beforehand, but those inevitably went up in smoke due to his own emotions. It might be the grief, in which case that could be partially excused, or it could just be that his character is too flighty to actually get anything productive done.
tl;dr: The idea of a romance told from a man's perspective laced with time travel is an interesting concept, but it wasn't executed too well. Mr. Glover should have gotten beta readers to read it before self-publishing. While I am glad that I've read this, I wouldn't want to read it again very soon.
November 24, 2013
Time doesn't heal all wounds. Great story about a love that never dies. A little romance and a lot if Indian folklore help our hero get is second chance at love. And now a bit about the plot...
Lisa and Roger are so very much in love and are engaged to be married. The big day is about a week away and they are both ecstatic!! It is going to be a simple ceremony with family and a few close friends. Roger has just finished painting the bedroom when tragedy strikes. Lisa is killed in a car accident. The pain of losing Lisa has him twisted in knots. When Roger is given a second chance at loving Lisa will he take it? Even if it means he could die?
Favorite passages:
- "So you are willing to risk your life to see her again?" Roger shook his head, "Not just see her, but to be with her again, to hold her next to me. I want to see that expression of love on her face when I take her hand into mine.
- "All is not lost. A wrong from your past can be put right. The power lies within you. Only you have the control to make things as you wish them."
Lisa and Roger are so very much in love and are engaged to be married. The big day is about a week away and they are both ecstatic!! It is going to be a simple ceremony with family and a few close friends. Roger has just finished painting the bedroom when tragedy strikes. Lisa is killed in a car accident. The pain of losing Lisa has him twisted in knots. When Roger is given a second chance at loving Lisa will he take it? Even if it means he could die?
Favorite passages:
- "So you are willing to risk your life to see her again?" Roger shook his head, "Not just see her, but to be with her again, to hold her next to me. I want to see that expression of love on her face when I take her hand into mine.
- "All is not lost. A wrong from your past can be put right. The power lies within you. Only you have the control to make things as you wish them."
February 21, 2013
I finished this book in one sitting...could not stop reading once I got started. It was an easy, fun, light-hearted read. Be sure to check it out--kindle & print version both available through my friend, Edward Glover!
August 17, 2014
This was a short and fast read that I really enjoyed. A twist on the time travel genre. Nice use of the supernatural to fuel the transfer, rather than science. I also liked the build up of motivation with the characters. By the end, there were no good guys. Great job!
July 24, 2013
I really enjoyed this! Way to go! I have recommended it to several friends.
December 19, 2015
This was a great read! Not your typical time travel romance. Lots of twists, turns & complex characters.
June 21, 2017
I get what the author was trying to do. But it didn't work for me. Knew what would happen early on. 2*
March 26, 2016
There is quite a bit happening in the book and information to soak in that can sometimes feel like a bit much but all in all it is good. I bought this book at a local convention after having known the author for 2 years and constantly promising to buy the books but never having the money. I caved this time and put them on my credit card.
It took me three days to read this 179 page gem thanks to the call of adult life. But I finally finished it.
Gene at several points seems a bit like a douche and Roger concerns me with his terrifying need to get back to his dead love using any means necessary.
Now all that being said, don't get me wrong, I thoroughly enjoyed this book, only putting it down when it was utmost necessary for my need to be a fully functional member of society.
When we first meet Roger, he goes through one of the most heart breaking losses a person can go through and you watch as his life spirals out of control. He is given hope again by two unlikely characters, an old Indian named Richard and (my personal favorite character ever) Percy the crow. That's right, an awesome supernatural bird!
Anyway, Roger is intrigued by the possibility of time travel knowing that by breaking every law known to sci-fi fans, he could have his woman back. This is when Roger's actions begin to worry me; he doesn't care if he gets ticketed or arrested, he doesn't care about being late to work, he has no cares about being sent home from work, and he has a blatant disregard for the possibility of being fired. His only thought is on his dead love.
Don't get me wrong, I have lost people I wish desperately that I could get back, but this behavior is unhealthy. (Yes, I am aware this is a fictional character.)
I applaud E.G. Grover for managing to make me want to be able to leave work more than I already desire on a daily basis to get the chance to read this book. No spoilers from me, if you want to know what happens, read the book yourself.
I can tell you this though, I messaged E.G. Grover after finishing this book to tell him just how much I hate him.
It took me three days to read this 179 page gem thanks to the call of adult life. But I finally finished it.
Gene at several points seems a bit like a douche and Roger concerns me with his terrifying need to get back to his dead love using any means necessary.
Now all that being said, don't get me wrong, I thoroughly enjoyed this book, only putting it down when it was utmost necessary for my need to be a fully functional member of society.
When we first meet Roger, he goes through one of the most heart breaking losses a person can go through and you watch as his life spirals out of control. He is given hope again by two unlikely characters, an old Indian named Richard and (my personal favorite character ever) Percy the crow. That's right, an awesome supernatural bird!
Anyway, Roger is intrigued by the possibility of time travel knowing that by breaking every law known to sci-fi fans, he could have his woman back. This is when Roger's actions begin to worry me; he doesn't care if he gets ticketed or arrested, he doesn't care about being late to work, he has no cares about being sent home from work, and he has a blatant disregard for the possibility of being fired. His only thought is on his dead love.
Don't get me wrong, I have lost people I wish desperately that I could get back, but this behavior is unhealthy. (Yes, I am aware this is a fictional character.)
I applaud E.G. Grover for managing to make me want to be able to leave work more than I already desire on a daily basis to get the chance to read this book. No spoilers from me, if you want to know what happens, read the book yourself.
I can tell you this though, I messaged E.G. Grover after finishing this book to tell him just how much I hate him.
July 4, 2016
All the motivations and the movement of the main plot make sense and work. It’s an oft-used time travel story premise with a modern twist to it without relying on futuristic tech to get there.
Roger goofs up big time at one point, and the next thing you know, Richard comes along and bails him out. On the one hand, this is extremely convenient. On the other, Richard has presumably dealt with time traveling noobs for decades and has learned to anticipate their missteps.
Either way, I wanted to see Roger have to work for it a bit more. At the very least, there should have been an instance where Roger asked Richard for help instead of the guide mysteriously knowing he was needed.
The writing is tight, but it is also sparse in places. For a novella length piece, it was written more like a short story that got out of hand. There is the main plot and distinct lack of subplots, as you would expect in a short story, but with the given length, it feels more bare bones than it should. I would have liked to see more of Roger and Lisa’s relationship or at least one subplot dealing with Mystery Hill itself or something within the town that tied in with Lisa’s accident to give the story more depth.
The book is very pacy. Nothing lags. It moves along at a brisk pace from beginning to end.
It’s a solid story if a bit predictable for those who have delved deep into the time travel genre. It’d make for a good one for those new to the genre.
Roger goofs up big time at one point, and the next thing you know, Richard comes along and bails him out. On the one hand, this is extremely convenient. On the other, Richard has presumably dealt with time traveling noobs for decades and has learned to anticipate their missteps.
Either way, I wanted to see Roger have to work for it a bit more. At the very least, there should have been an instance where Roger asked Richard for help instead of the guide mysteriously knowing he was needed.
The writing is tight, but it is also sparse in places. For a novella length piece, it was written more like a short story that got out of hand. There is the main plot and distinct lack of subplots, as you would expect in a short story, but with the given length, it feels more bare bones than it should. I would have liked to see more of Roger and Lisa’s relationship or at least one subplot dealing with Mystery Hill itself or something within the town that tied in with Lisa’s accident to give the story more depth.
The book is very pacy. Nothing lags. It moves along at a brisk pace from beginning to end.
It’s a solid story if a bit predictable for those who have delved deep into the time travel genre. It’d make for a good one for those new to the genre.
July 9, 2016
While I saw some of the problems other people had (weird formatting, somewhat predictable ending, predictable story line) this was not a bad book, and it was a really fast read.
A man loses his fiance in a car accident five days before their wedding. A year later he finds a way to fix the situation. His best friend tries to talk him out of it. Things that can't be changed happen and lives are forever changed.
This was a really fast read, which can often be good in a book, and I found it to be great in this book. I enjoyed reading this, even if parts of it were predictable. The characters had a wonderful relationship and I wish it had been further developed (the reader knows nothing about their pasts really). I actually think this could have been longer and that parts of it could have been further developed and written.
All in all I enjoyed it, I just wish there had been more.
A man loses his fiance in a car accident five days before their wedding. A year later he finds a way to fix the situation. His best friend tries to talk him out of it. Things that can't be changed happen and lives are forever changed.
This was a really fast read, which can often be good in a book, and I found it to be great in this book. I enjoyed reading this, even if parts of it were predictable. The characters had a wonderful relationship and I wish it had been further developed (the reader knows nothing about their pasts really). I actually think this could have been longer and that parts of it could have been further developed and written.
All in all I enjoyed it, I just wish there had been more.
August 12, 2014
No surprises
No surprises
In my opinion this book held no surprises! It was poorly written ! I would not recommend it as anything but a waste of time!
No surprises
In my opinion this book held no surprises! It was poorly written ! I would not recommend it as anything but a waste of time!
September 9, 2016
Not bad.
There were inconsistencies in the story which annoyed me at times but it was competently written and had an interesting ending.
The cover earned it an extra half a star too.
There were inconsistencies in the story which annoyed me at times but it was competently written and had an interesting ending.
The cover earned it an extra half a star too.
January 5, 2017
DNF (or more like skipping to the end).
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