मकड़जाल

Thrillers #53

by सुरेन्द्र मोहन पाठक

डॉक्टर सिंगला ने तरक्की का ऐसा रास्ता चुना था जिसमें उसकी गर्दन के गिर्द एक डोरी बंधी थी जिसका दूसरा सिरा सदानन्द पुणेकर नाम के मकड़े के हाथ में था, डोरी की जुम्बिश से पुणेकर जम्प का इशारा करता था तो वो जम्प करता था, रोल का इशारा करता था तो वो रोल करता था, डांस का इशारा करता था तो वो डांस करता था । कहां ले जा के पटका था उसके लालच ने उसे

368 pages, Mass Market Paperback

First published May 1, 2007

About the author

Surender Mohan Pathak, is an author of Hindi-language crime fiction with 314 books to his credit. His major characters are Crime reporter Sunil (unprecedented 123 Titles), Vimal (46 Titles) and Philosopher Detective Sudhir (23 titles). Apart from series, he has written 60+ Novels in thriller category.

Reviews

[Rajan · Rating 4 out of 5]

"Grandmaster" is second and final part of "Makadjaal" the thriller.

Part 1 was very good. There are only four characters
Punekar the Don who is aged and has a young sexy wife. His young wife is a sex and money maniac. She married for money.
Kothari a shady lawyer who handles only one client, Punekar.
Doctor Singla who is Punekar’s wife’s lover.
Dr Singla agrees to kill Punekar on his wife’s insistence. The story is good and the end is a cliffhanger.

Part 2 starts from where part 1 ended and the story goes haywire from there. The second part was unnecessary and it has no rhyme or reason. There are so many plot holes and that even potboiler tag can’t help it. It was even worse than the normal lugdi novels of other novels. There are so many twists the story lost relevance and the most irritating part was the lawyer of wife. Police detectives and the lawyer were like fortune tellers and can see in future and past. They deducted everything and started the investigation without any corpse. In many of his previous novels Pathak himself said that there can not be any case without the corpse. They have no reason to investigate the case as murder immediately. Still they did. There are so many inconsistencies and in the end, it was very boring. Huge letdown.

[Mukesh Kumar · Rating 2 out of 5]

The plot is a little too stretched, I felt. But good in parts.

[Sameer Mehra · Rating 1 out of 5]

1/5 stars

कहानी के नाम पर एक गरीब डॉक्टर सिंघला होता है जो एक ड्रग्स तस्कर-व्यापारी का पर्सनल डॉक्टर बनता है फिर उसकी बीवी से अफेयर हो जाता है.

मुझे ये किताब बहुत ज्यादा slow pace लगी और content भी कुछ ख़ास नहीं लगा. नींद आ गई पढ़ते हुए, जो smpji के कट्टर fan है वो जरूर पसंद करेंगे.

[Amit Dubey · Rating 5 out of 5]

Awesome as always. What a book. Enjoyed every word. Highly recommended for all to read


Awesome as always. What a book. Enjoyed every word. Highly recommended for all to read. Second part is even better.

[Jee Onn]

Its a great novel i want to read next serees

[SANGEETA · Rating 5 out of 5]

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