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The Thirteenth Heart
It was a dark and stormy day when FBI Agent Joshua Kane took down the most heinous serial killer of his career, Mason Alexander. But is he really gone?
Join Joshua's daughter, Alex Kane, as she deals with the aftermath of her father's death and a potential ghost of the killer he once slayed.
Join Joshua's daughter, Alex Kane, as she deals with the aftermath of her father's death and a potential ghost of the killer he once slayed.
139 pages, Kindle Edition
First published July 28, 2012
About the author
Jennifer J. Carr
2 books16 followersI live in southern Indiana with my husband and daughter. Writing has always been a passion for me, I am just glad my family gave me the courage to publish it. I am an avid reader and enjoy reading all the Indie novels that would have never seen the light of day if it were not for self publishing.
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March 13, 2013
Got this ebook free. Really wasn't sure what to expect going into it but it was a fun read. The PoV changes take some getting used to but they work once the story gets going. Unlikely heroes are found throughout as well as a handful of plot twists that I rather enjoyed.
Give this one a chance. You might be surprised as well.
Give this one a chance. You might be surprised as well.
February 5, 2013
When Amazon offered this book as a free download during a promotion, I decided to take a chance on an unknown indie author since I am one myself. Carr has a genuine enthusiasm for writing and it comes across in every page of this book.
The story begins with FBI agent, Joshua Kane, facing down a sociopathic killer who has escaped from prison. The story took an unexpected turn right from the start and the author then weaves a tale of interlaced intrigue and evil. I’ve never been one for paranormal stories, but I found myself wanting to know what happened next. Perhaps it was Carr’s own energy flowing from the pages that kept my attention.
With plot twists and unlikely heroes and heroines, this story winds its way through the story with two distinct points of view that once the reader adjusts to, work well to add tension and emotion. The author keeps sex and swearing to a minimum and focuses on the story itself, never sidetracking the reader with “R” rated titillations. She struck a good balance between grit and storytelling.
A thorough proofreading is in order. The high volume of easily fixed errors detracts from the quality of the book and the credibility of the author. The same goes for the multitude of short statement-like sentences that stifle the flow of the read. Carr will do well to reconsider this style of writing to keep the readers eyes and thoughts moving along the page instead of constantly impeding flow with undeveloped sentences.
The story begins with FBI agent, Joshua Kane, facing down a sociopathic killer who has escaped from prison. The story took an unexpected turn right from the start and the author then weaves a tale of interlaced intrigue and evil. I’ve never been one for paranormal stories, but I found myself wanting to know what happened next. Perhaps it was Carr’s own energy flowing from the pages that kept my attention.
With plot twists and unlikely heroes and heroines, this story winds its way through the story with two distinct points of view that once the reader adjusts to, work well to add tension and emotion. The author keeps sex and swearing to a minimum and focuses on the story itself, never sidetracking the reader with “R” rated titillations. She struck a good balance between grit and storytelling.
A thorough proofreading is in order. The high volume of easily fixed errors detracts from the quality of the book and the credibility of the author. The same goes for the multitude of short statement-like sentences that stifle the flow of the read. Carr will do well to reconsider this style of writing to keep the readers eyes and thoughts moving along the page instead of constantly impeding flow with undeveloped sentences.
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