I read about 100 pages and had to stop. It's littered with punctuation and spelling errors, almost every other sentence. Speech marks in the wrong place or not at all, commas in the wrong place, words misspelled. It clearly wasn't proofread by anyone and it made it such a struggle to read. It's a shame as the actual story itself didn't seem to be that bad and the writer himself seems a nice bloke when we met him, but I couldn't deal with the grammar and it ruined the experience.