Seventeen-year-old Jazz is beautiful, kind and little naive. Jazz has a father that is in prison, a mother that is sleeps with other men for money. Well she has to have some way to make ends meet and provide a decent lifestyle for Jazz. Along with a cousin that is extremely jealous of Jazz. Jazz on the other hand is oblivious to it all. She knows how her mom gets down and the fact that her cousin is a hater is the one thing that she cannot seem to see, but everyone else around her can. Jazz is determined not to end up a like a lot of other girls, she is not out looking for a man to take care of her or anything like that, Jazz has dreams of making something of herself and getting herself out of the hood.
Enter Peter, although not the sexiest brother around, he still has a charm that most women seem to be drawn to. When he meets Jazz for the first time, he knows there is something special about her and is drawn to her because she is unlike any of the other females he has ever dealt with. Peter respects the fact that Jazz is holding onto her virginity until her eighteenth birthday. Although he respects it, it doesn't neccessarily mean he is going to wait for her to give him the goods.
I have to say I was really intriqued by all of the five-star ratings this book received. As I was reading the book though I had to wonder if it was the same story that these other readers read. Yes, the book was full of drama, damn near every page I turned something was jumping off. With the page count of this book, I thought it was a bit much. Not only that but I had a hard time trying to figure out who exactly was narrating the story. One minute a character is actually talking to the reader the next it is jumping back to first person. One spot in the story, it says subtitled as 4 minutes later...ok seriously? Just write what happened within those four minutes. Or, it was two weeks later. Ok? What happened in those two weeks? There were too many gaps within the storyline. The story itself runs on from past to present with no clear indication in the typeset of the story. Oh and the editing...opps I mean lack of editing, the mispellings etc., this story was in major need of a professional editor. One minute the a character is "whipping" the tears or "messaging" a body part. If a professional proofreader would have read this, things like this could have been easily caught. Salty by Aleta Adams could have been a better read if a proofreader, editor and a developmental editor was used.
Reviewed by Leona
For OOSA BookClub's 2K13 Letters & Themes Challenge.