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On the Verge
[on the verge: at the point when (something) is about to happen or is very likely to happen, but it never does.]
"On The Verge" is a nonfiction, journaling-style novella where I deal with my anxiety, dive into my emotions, and drift through the motions of life.
Trigger Warnings: Mental illness (anxiety & depression), Gaslighting (self-gaslighting), Grief, Panic attacks/disorders
"On The Verge" is a nonfiction, journaling-style novella where I deal with my anxiety, dive into my emotions, and drift through the motions of life.
Trigger Warnings: Mental illness (anxiety & depression), Gaslighting (self-gaslighting), Grief, Panic attacks/disorders
65 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 17, 2023
1 person is currently reading
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About the author
G. Severino
3 books17 followersContemporary and Adult Author
I’m an avid reader obsessed with fantasy worlds and romance stories, and with a burning passion for writing, I’m embarking on a journey of self-discovery through my words.
Born in Miami, Florida, and of Dominican and Puerto Rican descent, I’ve always had a love for storytelling that bridges cultures and perspectives.
My greatest desire is to read and write while traveling the world, coffee in hand, and finding inspiration in new places and experiences.
Writing is not just a craft for me—it’s how I connect with the magic of life and share that wonder with readers. Whether it’s a romance or an epic fantasy, my goal is to transport you to worlds you won’t want to leave.
“With endless stories to tell and a desire to bring in a new vision, light, and energy to connect with others.”
I’m an avid reader obsessed with fantasy worlds and romance stories, and with a burning passion for writing, I’m embarking on a journey of self-discovery through my words.
Born in Miami, Florida, and of Dominican and Puerto Rican descent, I’ve always had a love for storytelling that bridges cultures and perspectives.
My greatest desire is to read and write while traveling the world, coffee in hand, and finding inspiration in new places and experiences.
Writing is not just a craft for me—it’s how I connect with the magic of life and share that wonder with readers. Whether it’s a romance or an epic fantasy, my goal is to transport you to worlds you won’t want to leave.
“With endless stories to tell and a desire to bring in a new vision, light, and energy to connect with others.”
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August 9, 2023
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Alright, so "On the Verge" is like diving into someone's emotional rollercoaster as they chronicle all their battle with self-doubt and that constant "I'm not good enough" feeling. It's basically a journal-style exploration of the author’s emotional journey through the labyrinth of mental health struggles. With raw honesty, the author takes readers on a deeply personal expedition into their own mind, sharing the turbulence of emotions, the sense of being lost, and the overwhelming feeling of not measuring up.
The author holds nothing back - they're all about showing the real deal, creating an immediate and profound connection with readers who have battled similar feelings of inadequacy. And the whole journal setup? It's like you're right there, flipping through their thoughts as they happen. No filters, just real-talk.
But here's the deal - "On the Verge" is a reminder that finding yourself isn't a smooth highway; it's a messy off-road adventure. There's no quick fix here. It's about facing your doubts head-on and somehow finding the courage to deal with them.
In a world that's finally getting that mental health is a real thing, "On the Verge" steps up as a reminder that opening up about your struggles is a game-changer. Whether you've fought your own self-doubt battles or you're just curious about what goes on in other people's heads, this book gives you a real, no-holds-barred look at the journey to finding your footing and being fulfilled with who you are.
Seriously, if you've been in the same boat, you'll be nodding along like "Yep, been there, felt that." And yes, it helps to know that you’re not alone.
Thank you G. Severino, for sharing your story. ♥️
Alright, so "On the Verge" is like diving into someone's emotional rollercoaster as they chronicle all their battle with self-doubt and that constant "I'm not good enough" feeling. It's basically a journal-style exploration of the author’s emotional journey through the labyrinth of mental health struggles. With raw honesty, the author takes readers on a deeply personal expedition into their own mind, sharing the turbulence of emotions, the sense of being lost, and the overwhelming feeling of not measuring up.
The author holds nothing back - they're all about showing the real deal, creating an immediate and profound connection with readers who have battled similar feelings of inadequacy. And the whole journal setup? It's like you're right there, flipping through their thoughts as they happen. No filters, just real-talk.
But here's the deal - "On the Verge" is a reminder that finding yourself isn't a smooth highway; it's a messy off-road adventure. There's no quick fix here. It's about facing your doubts head-on and somehow finding the courage to deal with them.
In a world that's finally getting that mental health is a real thing, "On the Verge" steps up as a reminder that opening up about your struggles is a game-changer. Whether you've fought your own self-doubt battles or you're just curious about what goes on in other people's heads, this book gives you a real, no-holds-barred look at the journey to finding your footing and being fulfilled with who you are.
Seriously, if you've been in the same boat, you'll be nodding along like "Yep, been there, felt that." And yes, it helps to know that you’re not alone.
Thank you G. Severino, for sharing your story. ♥️
July 12, 2025
On the Verge reads as a voyeuristic window into the author’s raw and vulnerable emotional transformation. While each chapter is almost structured like a private diary, albeit more poetic, the actual experience of reading feels like conversation. The author questions life’s journey and prompts readers to engage in the dialogue. The questions begin as pleas on overcoming control, regret, and despair and transform into questions on how to embrace hope in life’s possibilities despite the uncertainties.
The journey begins ungrounded, the narrator so lost and unstable that even her thoughts barely exist in the physical space. As a reader, I was swept along in the liminal storm of her self-doubt and loneliness. The author writes in such a vulnerable way that you can only root for her to continue forward and see the potential. The journey continues and while the narrator initially doubts instances of hope, she eventually learns to lean into the verge and risk of life. As she gains strength, her thoughts become more physical, grounded in nature symbolism, for example, the sunlight dancing, self blooming, calmness rooting. The chaotic thoughts slow into a silence she embraces. And while the narrator continues to question life, the narrator becomes stronger and accepting of her own power in life.
The novella poetically captures the emotional struggle experienced by young adults and the growth that eventually follows. The ending leaves the reader with a pride in the resilience found and a sense of hope for themselves.
The journey begins ungrounded, the narrator so lost and unstable that even her thoughts barely exist in the physical space. As a reader, I was swept along in the liminal storm of her self-doubt and loneliness. The author writes in such a vulnerable way that you can only root for her to continue forward and see the potential. The journey continues and while the narrator initially doubts instances of hope, she eventually learns to lean into the verge and risk of life. As she gains strength, her thoughts become more physical, grounded in nature symbolism, for example, the sunlight dancing, self blooming, calmness rooting. The chaotic thoughts slow into a silence she embraces. And while the narrator continues to question life, the narrator becomes stronger and accepting of her own power in life.
The novella poetically captures the emotional struggle experienced by young adults and the growth that eventually follows. The ending leaves the reader with a pride in the resilience found and a sense of hope for themselves.
October 5, 2025
Poetic and real
“On The Verge” is a little outside of my reading comfort zone. But I met this author at a book convention and was intrigued.
I wouldn’t call this a novella, personally. I think it’s better as poetry. Because a lot of it is pretty damn poetic. It’s visceral and raw. It’s an explanation and exploration of human feelings that speaks to the soul. And while this may not be formatted as poetry, for me it qualifies anyway.
I gave this 4 stars. I honestly didn’t expect it to hit me as hard as it did, but it was beautiful and well worth the read.
“On The Verge” is a little outside of my reading comfort zone. But I met this author at a book convention and was intrigued.
I wouldn’t call this a novella, personally. I think it’s better as poetry. Because a lot of it is pretty damn poetic. It’s visceral and raw. It’s an explanation and exploration of human feelings that speaks to the soul. And while this may not be formatted as poetry, for me it qualifies anyway.
I gave this 4 stars. I honestly didn’t expect it to hit me as hard as it did, but it was beautiful and well worth the read.
August 9, 2023
On The Verge is a human experience. It deals with rock bottom and the flourishing top and all of the stuff in between. As raw and real as it can be, you'll find mental health representation that makes you want to hug the pages and say, "I'm so happy I'm not alone." 😩
No matter where you are in life, and regardless of relating to these things all the time or only sometimes, I think everyone can find comfort in these powerful words and heartfelt emotions.
💫 "And if it’s human experience to feel hurt, maybe it’s also human to open myself to happiness. Maybe, just maybe, there’s hope after all."
No matter where you are in life, and regardless of relating to these things all the time or only sometimes, I think everyone can find comfort in these powerful words and heartfelt emotions.
💫 "And if it’s human experience to feel hurt, maybe it’s also human to open myself to happiness. Maybe, just maybe, there’s hope after all."
August 14, 2023
It is a perfect example of being lost in your 20s and the mental battles and hardships one goes through. It's a novella that will leave you understanding that you are not alone in the troubles, leaving you with a different outlook on life.
I loved this book and would 100% recommend it to everyone.
I loved this book and would 100% recommend it to everyone.
September 26, 2023
Am I allowed to review my own story?
This is a nonfiction, journaling-style, novella in which each chapter is a different emotion and season of life that I've gone (or going) through. Everyone deals with their thoughts and inner turmoils in their own way, this one just works for me.
Be forewarned that some chapters might be hard to read. As one of my beta readers said, "It’s deeply emotional and raw."
I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it!
This is a nonfiction, journaling-style, novella in which each chapter is a different emotion and season of life that I've gone (or going) through. Everyone deals with their thoughts and inner turmoils in their own way, this one just works for me.
Be forewarned that some chapters might be hard to read. As one of my beta readers said, "It’s deeply emotional and raw."
I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it!
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