This is a kind of weird, woman-centered hood fantasy-- sweet young girl Jessica is sent to prison over a murder in the early eighties and when she gets out seven years later, she embarks on a crusade to overturn the crack dealers that have ruined her Harlem neighborhood. She does this with the help of her three best girl friends and some older Vietnam vets, in spectacular fashion, with explosions and guns and odd deaths. It really captures the flavor of the kind of stories I wanted to write when you just wanted to write something cool, to make your friends smile after study hall, and it's got a tearing, fireball energy.
That said, it's not especially good. The characters are very thin, and the scenarios of revenge and bad-assery are thinner. There are long dull patches-- like the trial scenes-- that Blue hasn't figured out how to make readable, and there are other awkward elements. The proofreading is more poor than usual-- I'm all about trying to capture the rhythms of Harlem speech, but there are words missing here that make the sentences not make sense. On other spots, there are just the not-quite-right word, like using "and" instead of "an."
In its best spots, it's an enjoyable romp, but it is a little too underdeveloped for me, on the level of production and planning.