Hannah had never known her father, but when she went off to college, economic circumstances required she stay with him. She was surprised at how handsome he was, how dignified, how strong and disciplined a man her father was. Before very long she was falling in love with him, despite his stern manner. Yet she was falling in love as a woman, rather than a daughter, and the thrill of her first real affair made her easy prey to the hot, steamy heat he raised in her young body. Soon she was being spanked for poor marks, and her wrists began to bear the marks of rope and chain. Spanking gave way to floggings and more severe punishments, and her father began to loan her body to other men. Then his new girlfriend Nicole moved in, and Nicole had a much sterner discipline in mind for Daddy's little girl.
JJ Argus started writing erotica in the 1980s working for Star Distributing, a New York publisher. He wrote 3 books a month until Star went under with the advent of the internet. He has also been published by Beeline and Beaver books, and sold short stories to Penthouse, Oui, Nugget, and numerous others. In the 1990s he began writing for British publishing houses, which required a decidedly higher level of quality and a lower level of obscenities. He has been published repeatedly by Olympia, Silver Moon, Chimera, and Virgin - Nexus. He has written and sold over 250 novels, most of which are now available in electronic format.
SPOILERS AHEAD (though for your sake I'd still recommend reading the review): This book was so weird. I liked the first half, absolutely hated the second. I've read erotica before. I like exploring, I guess you could say, because I'm a very curious person, so I've read everything from vanilla to light BDSM to intense BDSM to captive/rape stories. This is my first book about a daughter/father relationship though, having been curious about trying it after reading Under Mr. Nolan's Bed. I've been dying to find books about DDlg relationships, but unfortunately there aren't many so I decided to give this a try. First of all: this is not a DDlg relationship. This is actual incest. This is about the relationship between a girl and her actual biological father. If it sickens you to read these kinds of things (though it should be obvious by the title) then I suggest you don't bother. I'm not really sure what to think about this book. It started off okay, the sex scenes were good (if you can ignore that it's her dad, which I tried to) and I thought I might actually like the book. Then Nicole came. I was already irritated by the fact that her father took her to a place with the intent to loan her out (actually, he received money for it. So basically he prostituted her.) without giving her prior warning. That is not okay. Then I was even more pissed off at the fact that he ignored her even when she kept saying no. But when Nicole appeared, I about fucking lost it. God, I hated her. I have never disliked a character so much in my life. I kept praying that Hannah would fucking smack her and tell her dad to go to hell for taking her side. Neither of them respected her boundaries or limits at all, and I had to basically force myself to keep reading and not throw my computer at the wall. I'm all for submission and obeying and all of that jazz, don't get me wrong, but there were no safewords in this book, no respect for Hannah whatsoever, no caring, nothing. I can't count how many times Hannah said 'no' because she was scared out of her mind and really did not want to do something and was ignored and gagged or punished or tied down or something. I didn't feel like I was reading a book about BDSM. I felt like I was reading about her dad slowly showing what a monster he truly is. It would have been one thing if they had discussed beforehand their arrangement. If Hannah wanted a TPE with no safewords and no ability to make a decision and they had talked about this with respect for each other's wishes and desires, but they didn't, her dad just did whatever the fuck he wanted without any regard to her or her safety (He even left her with strange men that even HE didn't know while he went somewhere else. While she was tied down, unable to escape or defend herself should something happen. Are you kidding me?). And then during the end of the book Nicole decides that Hannah shouldn't be in school anymore so without even talking to her about it they pull her out of college and give her a cage to sleep in. Are you shitting me? At the beginning of the book, her dad was all for school, even spanking her if she didn't study properly. Then suddenly he's agreeing that she should be pulled out? What the hell? I was just really pissed off during the second half of the book, and I really wish Nicole would have died or something. I really, really despised her. The ending was fucking weird too. All in all, no I would not reread this. No, I probably wouldn't recommend it. No, I was not envious of Hannah's life. Though maybe I could have been if Nicole wasn't in the picture and I wasn't related to the guy.
The author maintains that his books are consensual BDSM.
Errrm.
No. The very basic constellation already defines this as non-con sadomasochism and not BDSM. There is no way that a father can have consensual sex with his actual daughter. This would mean it is neither "safe", nor "sane". Never mind the fecking lack of consensuality when a father forces himself onto a child. Even a (barely) legal one. What I think about his girlfriend foisting herself into the fray needs not even be detailed.
This is not BDSM. This is not even consensual incest. This is an eroticisation/romanticisation of the kind of abusive torture recently making the headlines as sexual slavery within a family.
This is not an age-play one at all. This is definitely incest, no getting around it. Mr. Argus creates another rather taboo story filled with corruption of an innocent little girl turned into a cum slut. The story is hot with gang banging, fisting, anal, public display, humiliation, forced f/f and of course, daddy daughter sex. Is this story for everyone? Probably not. Would I like this in real life? No. As a fantasy to read about, very tasty. I'd like to be Nicole in the story. ^_^ A hot read for those who like humiliation and deviance. Not for those into romance or HEA. There is no HEA here.
Really, this has to be some kind of joke. I'm just gonna put it out there. I just couldn't believe this whole thing was expected to be taken serious as a sincere shot at BDSM/age play. Yeah, I would have to admit that I anticipated this book from the summary. Yet, it fell shy of my expectations as a whole. I was thinking something completely different was gonna happen in this book; that's what I was led to believe. Honestly, I thought it would have gotten better as the story progressed. That was not the case, it had actually gotten worse.
First and foremost, this is incest. By any stretch of the word, the players in this book are actually biologically related to each other. No step-dad/step-daughter going on here. This story soon became more and more unpredictable. It did not remain consistent throughout the story. The whole ending and mommy aspect seemed forced, to be honest. It seemed as if the author just threw that little nugget in for good measure. It didn't seem to have any forethought on that issue; it seems as if the author decided to add that to the story at the last minute. It should have been more well-written, but it wasn't. I was extremely disappointed; yeah, it's smut but there are some excellent stories full of smut out there. But this ain't one of them.
I found myself blocking out the idea that this was father/daughter. The twisted ending was, I felt, even over the top for this subject matter. It made me want to throw the book (didn't cause I didn't want to break my kindle) and not even admit to reading it.