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Butterflies in the Storm
The definition of a sanctuary is 'a place of refuge'. Why would Melissa Jones ever need such a thing? She's led an ordinary life and, as far as she can recall, has never angered anyone. But an invitation to attend the funeral of an old school friend, of whom she has no recollection, and a meeting there with a woman called Danika, who is convinced Melissa's life is in danger, persuade her that she may, after all, need that sanctuary if she wants to stay alive.
Overseeing the work of the sanctuary is Verity Trask. Her duty is to ensure the safety of all the women who find themselves in her care, including Melissa. It's a duty she takes very seriously as Verity understands the true nature of the threat they all face, a threat that exists because of a single, horrific event centuries ago, an event known simply as the incident at Brathy Beck.
Overseeing the work of the sanctuary is Verity Trask. Her duty is to ensure the safety of all the women who find themselves in her care, including Melissa. It's a duty she takes very seriously as Verity understands the true nature of the threat they all face, a threat that exists because of a single, horrific event centuries ago, an event known simply as the incident at Brathy Beck.
240 pages, Paperback
Published February 13, 2024
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March 25, 2024
When Melissa Jones is invited to a funeral for a girl she doesn't remember knowing, the last thing she expects is to be whisked away from the funeral by a woman claiming her life is in danger. She's taken to a place where she's told she'll be safe from a threat she never knew existed that all started hundreds of years in the past at a place called Brathy Beck.
Though the synopsis for this book was very vague, I was intrigued enough to give it a try. And the book starts off with a bang, with Melissa's escape from unknown danger and flight to the secretive sanctuary in some nebulous location. (It took me a long time to realize this book is set in England, as I don't remember any location names being given until quite a ways in.) But as Melissa tries to get her bearings in this complex full of women, she's given nothing but vague answers by everyone she encounters. I'm annoyed for her, since supposedly she's not a prisoner and this is all for her benefit, so the only reason I can see for all the secrecy is that the author wants to add suspense for the reader. As the answers begin to unfold, though, they take the form of the different women at the sanctuary telling their own story of how they came to be there. And for the most part, all of the stories are the same. Names and locations are different and the initial situation for each woman is different, but they all become a fight to free the woman from the men who are trying to catch or kill her and a flight to the sanctuary. After a few of these stories, I started to skim through them.
The fantasy element comes with the explanation, which, since it's kept a secret for so long, feels like a spoiler to explain completely. But I will at least say that the fantasy element is also vague and could definitely have been expanded on some. By the last quarter or so of the book, the plot has devolved into a "who will end up with who" pseudo-romance, in which apparently all of these women are lesbians, who apparently marry men they care nothing about for the sole purpose of reproduction. Since this is not my preference in reading and wasn't indicated anywhere in any of the locations this book is advertised, I can easily say that I am not the right audience for this book, which of course influences my rating and review.
In the end, the premise of the book was interesting and started off good, which is the main reason for 2 stars. But it simply became too repetitious and then took a left turn from the sort of suspenseful tone that was set up to focus on relationships. The ending was anti-climactic. Also, though the book was self-published, I didn't notice a lot of line-editing issues that I often do with self-published books (typos, grammar issues, etc.). There are some weird formatting issues that might just be an issue with the ebook, but I didn't factor them into my rating. Still, though, while I can't say I'd recommend this book to anyone, I'm sure it has an audience that just doesn't include me. Please do check it out at the link below if you're interested.
I received a free review copy from the publisher in exchange for my honest unedited feedback.
Though the synopsis for this book was very vague, I was intrigued enough to give it a try. And the book starts off with a bang, with Melissa's escape from unknown danger and flight to the secretive sanctuary in some nebulous location. (It took me a long time to realize this book is set in England, as I don't remember any location names being given until quite a ways in.) But as Melissa tries to get her bearings in this complex full of women, she's given nothing but vague answers by everyone she encounters. I'm annoyed for her, since supposedly she's not a prisoner and this is all for her benefit, so the only reason I can see for all the secrecy is that the author wants to add suspense for the reader. As the answers begin to unfold, though, they take the form of the different women at the sanctuary telling their own story of how they came to be there. And for the most part, all of the stories are the same. Names and locations are different and the initial situation for each woman is different, but they all become a fight to free the woman from the men who are trying to catch or kill her and a flight to the sanctuary. After a few of these stories, I started to skim through them.
The fantasy element comes with the explanation, which, since it's kept a secret for so long, feels like a spoiler to explain completely. But I will at least say that the fantasy element is also vague and could definitely have been expanded on some. By the last quarter or so of the book, the plot has devolved into a "who will end up with who" pseudo-romance, in which apparently all of these women are lesbians, who apparently marry men they care nothing about for the sole purpose of reproduction. Since this is not my preference in reading and wasn't indicated anywhere in any of the locations this book is advertised, I can easily say that I am not the right audience for this book, which of course influences my rating and review.
In the end, the premise of the book was interesting and started off good, which is the main reason for 2 stars. But it simply became too repetitious and then took a left turn from the sort of suspenseful tone that was set up to focus on relationships. The ending was anti-climactic. Also, though the book was self-published, I didn't notice a lot of line-editing issues that I often do with self-published books (typos, grammar issues, etc.). There are some weird formatting issues that might just be an issue with the ebook, but I didn't factor them into my rating. Still, though, while I can't say I'd recommend this book to anyone, I'm sure it has an audience that just doesn't include me. Please do check it out at the link below if you're interested.
I received a free review copy from the publisher in exchange for my honest unedited feedback.
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March 18, 2024I received a free copy from LibraryThing.
I did not finish reading this. After 12 chapters, I was so confused.... I couldn't go on reading. I don't believe it was a bad or terrible book, I just had a hard time staying with the story.
I did not finish reading this. After 12 chapters, I was so confused.... I couldn't go on reading. I don't believe it was a bad or terrible book, I just had a hard time staying with the story.
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