I'm not sure how this book got past editors and fact checkers. There were lots of very awkward sentences and some strange mistakes... Down's Syndrome? Really...does the syndrome belong to a Mr. Down? During the fire Susan felt a cool draft of air whe See Nancy’s answer.

Nancy

I'm still reading. I'm wondering when an initial manuscript goes to the editor, does it really have a listing of previous books by the author and his bio information? Doesn't that get tacked on to the finished product by the publisher?

KATHLEEN

Is it an editing error or intentional? In the "Joy" section - when Joy is in Pund's office asking for his help, on page 52 Joy mentions her scooter but does not describe it. On page 54 when Pund is talking to Fraser he refers to the scooter as being See Mary’s answer.

Mary Lins