Falling Immortality Reading Chapter 16

Author: Robert Downs
Book: Falling Immortality

This scene proves my main character Casey Holden can add humor to any situation, even with a too-serious cop.

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message 1: by [deleted user]

I expected your voice to sound more.......old.

Robert Thanks...I think. I'm not sure if I should take your comment as a compliment or insult.

message 3: by [deleted user]

Oh...haha no it's not an insult. If you wish to take it as a compliment, that is perfectly acceptable. I simply meant that you have sort of a mature looking face (not old) and your voice didn't seem to match it at first.

Jeez, can I at least have shovel to dig my grave or am I going to be forced to continue using my words?

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