Logan’s Reviews > Storm: Dawn of a Goddess > Status Update

Last chapter. Trying not to hate Tiffany for this as much as I did but you basically wrote 80% coming of age 20% superhero story with no impressive blending of the two and I am so beyond disappointed

Just 51 more pages, Logan. 51 more pages 😭

It took a whopping 232 pages for Storm to become curious about learning her own powers.

Still hating everything

This is painful

"Mortified by the way my skin is probably turning bright red, I nod wordlessly and he continues." pg.138

This line makes me wonder if this was completely ghost written or something bc why is the most iconic black female superhero turning bright red in any capacity? Ghostwriter or not Tiffany Danelle Jackson, I curse you to the end of your days for this mess

Black authors who refuse to use the word brown when describing black skin and instead opt for food like chocolate and cocoa??? 😃😃😃 I want your head on a stick and I'm not even playing

This is the worst fanfiction I have ever read. Someone else should've been paid for this

I've been a fan of Jackson since Monday's not coming, and I've known her writing is very simple all that time, but I will never forgive her for making Storm so painfully lame and not like other girls all bc of her hair, very cheap interpretation of this character