Mutmainah’s Reviews > Fifty Words for Rain > Status Update
Mutmainah
is 30% done
These characterizations (Nori as an 11 year old, Nori and Akira's sibling dynamic) feel ever so slightly off but maybe that's the point.
— May 11, 2022 07:16PM
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Mutmainah
is 48% done
I probably wouldn't have picked this up if I'd known this was the direction the plot would be going in. Beyond that, this doesn't really feel rooted in time or place, which poses a problem for a historical fiction. The prose and dialogue keep pulling me out of what is supposed to be post-war Japan.
— May 12, 2022 08:41AM
