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'There are people here in this town, in this dirty river town with this dirty river running through it, who will be quick to tell you that what happened to our father, when he walked out into the river, was that he, our father, in the river, drowned. But us brothers, we are here to tell you this: that our father, when he walked out into the river, no, our father, he did not die. He lived is what our father did.'
— Sep 21, 2021 12:33PM
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Jeremy Maddux
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'There is a river flowing inside Girl’s body that floats up out of Girl whenever Girl breathes. Brothers other than us might say, that’s no river, that’s just some girl breathing out her girl breath, but us brothers who made Girl and us brothers who believe Girl, we know a river when a river’s what we see.'
— Sep 21, 2021 01:44PM
Jeremy Maddux
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This hissing, it is a sound that us brothers, we have never heard mud make this sound ever before. Listen with us now to this mud burning. The mud, it is alive now with flame and with fire. No, Brother, there is nothing slow and just smoking away about the way that this fire is burning. Us brothers, we are jumping back now just to keep our boots from catching on fire. The mud, it is good and it is burning.
— Jun 20, 2021 10:50AM
Jeremy Maddux
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The repetition in the prose of this one is giving me painful flashbacks of Because by Joseph Riipi. But there is something interesting developing if you can look past it.
— Dec 16, 2020 03:39PM
