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Cari L. Pedstelak
Cari L. Pedstelak is 95% done
Decent storylines despite the editing errors found throughout, but there are points where these books seem rushed. In the second two books, the spoiled whining of the female lead begins to grate on one's nerves, as does "The Frenchman's" overbearingly oppressive jealousy. I'm no prude, but there's a fine line between 'BDSM' play and outright bullying--a line I felt was crossed a few too often.
Mar 26, 2013 07:35PM
Grandmaster's Legacy (Erotic Historical Suspense, Box Set)

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Cari L. Pedstelak
Cari L. Pedstelak is 11% done
Not exactly what I'd expected and a bit slow in the beginning, but it's becoming more interesting as the pace picks up.
Feb 13, 2013 09:07PM
Grandmaster's Legacy (Erotic Historical Suspense, Box Set)


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