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Dear Ms. Dean,
When writing a story with legal issues as a major plot point, please do some research into how the laws actually work.
What you have written is not how inheritance or zoning laws work, and having all of your characters, including an attorney, oblivious to this fact is unacceptable — even for fiction.
— Apr 17, 2019 09:05PM
When writing a story with legal issues as a major plot point, please do some research into how the laws actually work.
What you have written is not how inheritance or zoning laws work, and having all of your characters, including an attorney, oblivious to this fact is unacceptable — even for fiction.
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