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'When Pants McDonovan was a child he didn’t use toilet paper. He’d pull his underpants up, and using three fingers, wiggle them into the fabric, into his ass, and once there, curl-pick his fingers until assumed clean.'
This passage offers nothing in service to the plot. I don't know what purpose it serves unless it's serving an authorial perversion.
— Feb 11, 2019 06:01PM
This passage offers nothing in service to the plot. I don't know what purpose it serves unless it's serving an authorial perversion.
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Jeremy Maddux
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'He squeezes her around her upper back and swallows her smallness. He envisions a life without her, living in this heat with Remy, and thinks how a family isn’t a family with just a daughter and a father. He’s going to lose her. Each strand of her hair is coated in sweat. He hums, and together their hips sway and he says yes, her children remember everything, that’s their job, to keep remembering.'
— Jul 27, 2018 02:13PM
