Kris’s Reviews > Master and Apprentice > Status Update

I like following the relationship between Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan. All the other cutaway characters I'm taking longer to warm up to. The sometimes pandering writing doesn't help. Name-dropping random people in the background just bc the reader knows who they are. If they're not part of the scene or the story at all, why do we need to list the full government names of these people walking by? Very stilted.