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That was quick... it felt like a first chapter to me... I’m more used to 150 page comics... I think the world is fascinating and I liked White Claw... but Taho the seemingly main character was a bit of a butt... he wants revenge *rolls eyes*

Yeah this will be interesting...

Wow... that last battle was magnificent... totally worth reading through to the end even though I was bored at times... letting Gruber go... folly total folly...

Kitty and Gwen are an item... the king visits a lot and Abby is knighted! A bit boring this half too long winded...

Pretty good! An odd mix of adult story and middle grade. A pretty open ended ending...

Honestly Neil sounds like a young man in his 20s many times... this line about the abbot being a politician is a case in point. I like him though and Char... and agree about the abbot and it’s fishy he seems so old...

Hmmm the big reveal of the Washu family is covered up but then one of the sons comes in and kills all of the remaining ones!! The investigator who revealed they were ghouls went over the side... Ken is now the one eyed king?! The Aogiri tree ghouls were 98% wiped out though... where is this going!?

Then we have those outside who survived from the previous volume... Naki, the white suits and the little doll ghoul... some investigator? Attacks? Then I think she shows up? Not sure exactly who it is... I’m guessing...

We have a bunch of battles going on... the most interesting is Owl, Mado, Amon and now Urie with the Qs because I know all of these characters. Amon is a Ghoul now?! I can see Mado’s guilt about the Owl... the one murderer she/he/she is so weird... then there is the mad scientist with his new and old experiments and a bunch of peeps I don’t know...

Amon wants the Owl to come back to being a ghoul investigator... Mado... the girl investigator puts a knife through the owl’s eye... the girl with the twin in her gets back to the guy who experimented on dead/dying investigators like the owl... he says her twin is dead and he gets out his newest creation to fight her...

Back to not knowing what’s what 😫 oooh recognize the Owl... that other guy was Amon?! I know who Amon is but don’t relate him to this thin dude... who did the owl used to be? What was that hand flying off?!

Hmmm I like Char but things need to get on with Niall! I like his uncle but the abbot seems evil...

Hmmm the boy is a ninny but likable...

The end was like the beginning kind of ridiculous and too easy. I loved the Korean culture mentioned and the world building what there was was decent. It’s a case of no 13 yo being able to do all this and there were moments she used words no 13 year old would know.

Love the culture woven into spots of the story... the world building is decent... love the 2 friends on the ship and her impersonating Jane... the whole table thing in the beginning and getting into trouble was so contrived and stupid... and all the lying in the beginning was tough. And she sure burns bridges fast.

I really liked this... there were a couple of dull parts cause duplication but I was also surprised at a couple parts too... I wanted to read about the attack near the beginning and am a little disappointed we are just told again... I did like seeing his ascension in the firmament... and to learn there is a third book!!

Not a fan of the one page story arcs... this is too comic for me and it’s more preaching about the Muslim way of life than a relationship between two girls who are very different. I need a story people, not brief moments to laugh or smile.

Frozen Flowers by Kore Yamazaki - This is a lovely story about Hazel and his aunt Marie... he goes and sees her every year for Christmas, she is a two legged centaur and not a part of the family any more because of it... it was sweet and family and all about the season!

Hmmm I like that this is moving faster than Spinning Silk... funny the Nobu brother part was shown but not the two soldiers... loved Sato taking out Nobu with her spider warriors... and I liked that Shin fought to tell Furu the truth...

The mill part passes quickly... it didn’t mention him being dragged away but that he was sent away... it felt awkward to me... I guess because it didn’t feel like those spots jived... and is the queen the old lady in human form... I’m iffy on that as well. Shin sure has a ton of warring loyalties... shocking he had anything left over to fall in love.

Uhhh well I would not have expected that if I were Ken... though that was the only possible way he could have been saved... being a one eyed ghoul has its benefits... interesting Rize made fun of the gourmet... is he the one who set up her accident?!

Ken gets embroiled in a quest to find out the location of s secret club members only ghoul restaurant so that he can trade it to learn what this ghoulchick knows about Rize’s accident that caused his condition... he meets the gourmet who has the answer but it seems all too easy. Ken also saves Nishiki who seems to have a gf who knows he’s a ghoul?!

Thru 32 - Hinami is sent to stay with Touka at her apt... Yomo trains T and Ken, he’s better than them! The gourmet a ghoul has been preying a lot in the area...

Wow!! Now we’ve transitioned to the part of the story we know... it’s moving quicker which is nice but it’s fun to read his POV with its morally grey reasoning ... that he needs to convince Yumi to be loyal to him.

The first part when he’s in the shogun’s army is done... the doctor was fascinating and how he taught Shin about medicine and helped him accept his own nature! The uncle provided a bloodless war... with a lot less care for Shin...

Chap 29 - suddenly here at the end we get Amon and Mado’s history with an apple masked ghoul... I see that his story flow is a lot better in re... this is odd tacked on at the end like this...

Thru chap 28 - Hinami gets close enough to killing Mado that Touka can finish him... Yomo finds Ken and gives him meat to calm his hunger... they get to Touka and Hinami ... Mr. Y looks on...

Chap 26 - Ken gets Amon incapacitated and will eat him so he tells the man to run so he won’t be a murderer... Hinami can’t stand seeing Touka hurt so she takes Mado’s hand!! Pretty cool...

They chap 25 - poor Hinami she gets lured out to a trap using her mother’s hand... Mado is there, we learn from him that the quinques are made from the kagunes of ghouls... I guess the team in re is an advanced version of Qs. They used to be weapons wielded by the investigators!

22 - Touka tells Hinami she’s going to take care of everything... Hinami reads in the newspaper left for her about the investigators death and condolences and realizes it’s like her... she disappears with investigators in the area!