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The sex in this book sounds like horrible corn. It feels like the difference between the over exaggerated corn and that’s why it’s so cringe for me. It’s horrible. Where’s the good spice?

This is SOOOOOO cringe. Officially no longer accepting TikTok famous authors. Cause… no

… yeah he would have lost me a long time ago lol

The banter is everything

Storyline is good, have a few critiques for the writing but the characters feel real.

Do I force myself to finish or dnf?

Yeah… might not try and force myself. This is… not it. Repetitive. The conversations don’t flow they tell too much. Certain parts are too quick as far as the MMC and FMC. There’s ways to do it that doesn’t feel forced.

Yeah…. This is not good.

This book does so much telling, which cheapens the experience.

This book is what a person thinks they think others would want to know about being a spy….