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December 5 has been the best so far, but these stories are underdeveloped and not good

This story was a little more interesting, but the ending left me wanting to know why the parents didn’t want Santa getting out. It just ended kind of abruptly for me.

December 2- the story was a little more “horror” like, but the story was short and wasn’t very developed.

The first story wasn’t scary at all. There wasn’t anything that got my heart racing. It was corny and unforgettable

Brooks goes to the marriage counselor alone. There is only one other mention of visiting this counselor - when they both are trying to fix their marriage, but the counselor says they’ve been coming to him for moths when Brooks mentions sitting there like he did moths ago… there are so many inconsistencies like this in the book.

There are so many writing errors in this book. For example Mrs. Evert comes carrying a cobbler and find a minute later she “shoves her hands on her hips.” Did she drop the cobbler to put her hands on her hips?