It annoys me when editing is sloppy.. errors, typos, thats one thing.. but things like this latest scene I just read? It's like the author completely forgot she'd just slathered goo onto both their faces, so now the whole rest of the chapter is read knowing they have gunk masking all this expressions but they're acting like they don't--it completely changed the feel of everything that happened & was very distracting.
— Jul 19, 2018 04:06PM
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