OMG... So perfect that you can just start a whole novel... With ”SHOCK SLOWED THE SCENE down to a breathless silent stretch”...We already know what happens but what if your book started off with this... Kind of like... It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen.. Makes you go wtf... ”SHOCK SLOWED THE SCENE down to a breathless silent stretch” does just that...wtf; well done James
— Mar 31, 2020 04:12PM
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