I see so many love this including friends, but he wastes so much time with extraneous words that matter not to the story. The story at times is interesting, but then he manages to slow it down and change it on the fly to make it tedious. Sticking with this, but I don't think I have ever read a book more in need of heavy, heavy editing.It will take a miracle of writing to make me rate this above 2 stars right now.
— Feb 01, 2018 08:36AM
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