I like the writing, but the software that makes it an e-book seems to blend all the separate segments into one - I wished there were even something as simple as a blank line separating sections when it changes scenes. It’s a bit off putting when one line has a good guy waving to the sheriff and then a bad guy is checking in to a hotel, with nary a break or cute symbol indicating something new.
— May 12, 2019 12:26PM
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