At 26%, it is interesting so far; however, it needs many commas & periods. There're are many run on sentences as well as sentences that contains multiple thoughts. Also, if editing is not going to be done, turn off the auto-complete - one does not stop trucks with a "road black," nor will anything last "for every." There are as many as five instances of obvious inadvertent word substitutions on at least one page.
— Feb 25, 2016 07:31PM
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