Page 52 of 378 Day Minus Two, 19:00 - I don't like it. The MC overthinks and fixates on minor details, the author writes a paragraph on topics that only need a sentence. Honestly, her husband's butt didn't need to be mentioned at all but it got 2, or 3 if you count his retort. I'm just not in the mood for over-information and repetitive writing.
— Aug 11, 2023 01:13PM
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