The first few chapters were better than expected. The start of the book was pretty strong. Now I’m reading a chapter that sounds like a junior high school girl wrote it. It’s painful to even read. Pastor Jack? Could that be a more obnoxious, stereotypical name? The interaction between the women is cliche, and that’s being kind. I’m hoping this gets better.
— Jan 11, 2025 09:37PM
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