Sometimes, these EU authors beat you over the head with references to the canon material, ie. Han talking about how Tauntauns smell horrible and other straight references like that. Also, author used the word goose. Find another word. We have refreshers, and turbolifts, we don’t need the word goose. Be more creative. I never like the real world words unless necessary. Outside of these things, it’s been good!
— Jan 28, 2024 07:00PM
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