Chapter 3 is a big improvement. We even have a character with the same name as the book, now. But surely he can't be our protagonist? He' old, and obnoxious. No, there's also a grandson with the same name: surely he will be our protagonist, if he ever shows up.
The social awkwardness caused by the mysterious relationship between Martin snr and his mysterious girl companion is interesting.
— Jan 06, 2014 03:51AM
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