Figured out what's holding me back. The premise is right up my alley, great characters but there is a lack of romantic narrative drive outside if "I will make you my slave because you like it/no I don't, wont...oh but maybe I do (small whisper)" style discourse and that's not engaging past 15%. I'll come back to this when I don't care as much.
— Jan 27, 2024 04:08PM
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