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Hate-reading at this point. 8 chapters for Hannah to go from her cell to the shed...I am not a fan of the monotonous introspection. The reader gets it - you're broken and tortured. No need to keep hammering that. No need for the laundry list of items like Doritos in her survival bag. Just. Fucking. Get. To. It.
The concept is good but execution falls flat.
— Dec 15, 2024 12:33PM
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The concept is good but execution falls flat.












