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Read my Story/Story Help > A wierd short story

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message 1: by Josh (new)

Josh | 83 comments So, here is a short horror story, but reading over it I dont think it was all that scary.
I was over at a friends house late one night reading short horror stories, and that shouldn't have been a problem, but I let my imagination run away with me, and when I got to my room I scared myself pretty bad. This story is the result.

tell me what you think.


message 2: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
I'll be sure to read it! But right now i'm doing my homework and shouldn't even be on goodreads! If I forget and don't read it by next week, you can somehow get my attention if you feel like it. :D

message 3: by Margaret (new)

Margaret | 49 comments That was really scary...

Xerxes Break(Vivian Ephona) (ephona) I LOVED IT!

message 5: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller you spelled W-E-I-R-D wrong. if you care...

message 6: by Josh (new)

Josh | 83 comments sorry about the spelling, I get things mixed up sometimes. And thank you for your reviews.

message 7: by Josh (new)

Josh | 83 comments And for anyone else who reads it, be as harsh as you like. Let me know what you liked about it, what you hated, and how I can improve my writing style. Dont be afraid to be mean. (within reason)

message 8: by Josh (new)

Josh | 83 comments come on pretty pretty please

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