A wierd short story

[Josh]

So, here is a short horror story, but reading over it I dont think it was all that scary.
I was over at a friends house late one night reading short horror stories, and that shouldn't have been a problem, but I let my imagination run away with me, and when I got to my room I scared myself pretty bad. This story is the result.

tell me what you think.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

[Veronica, What the neck!?]

I'll be sure to read it! But right now i'm doing my homework and shouldn't even be on goodreads! If I forget and don't read it by next week, you can somehow get my attention if you feel like it. :D

[Margaret]

That was really scary...

[Xerxes Break(Vivian Ephona)]

I LOVED IT!

[Paige]

you spelled W-E-I-R-D wrong. if you care...

[Josh]

sorry about the spelling, I get things mixed up sometimes. And thank you for your reviews.

[Josh]

And for anyone else who reads it, be as harsh as you like. Let me know what you liked about it, what you hated, and how I can improve my writing style. Dont be afraid to be mean. (within reason)

[Josh]

come on pretty pretty please