The Critique discussion

17 views
Post your writing > Harry's story: Flow

Comments Showing 1-5 of 5 (5 new)    post a comment »
dateDown arrow    newest »

message 1: by Joe The (new)

Joe The (sonicrulez) | 6 comments Mod
This is my story that I am working on. Also, Flow spelled backwards is Wolf, and lupus is Latin for Wolf, and lupus is the name of Olivia's story.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...



message 2: by ~Sunny~ (new)

~Sunny~ | 1 comments collness


message 3: by Olivia (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) The story is good! It is a little confusing, though.


message 4: by Joe The (new)

Joe The (sonicrulez) | 6 comments Mod
WELL, its gonna get better.



message 5: by Olivia (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) well yeah


back to top