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message 1: by Olivia (new)

Here you can post comments about my story!

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message 2: by Izzy (new)

Really interesting! I'm not usually interested in books like that, but this was great!

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message 3: by Olivia (new)

Cool thanks!

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message 4: by Olivia (new)

Anything you think I should change, or?

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message 5: by Izzy (new)

Maybe u should explain Torran a little more

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message 6: by Olivia (new)

Yeah, I plan on doing so later. I am going to add some more chapters, so...

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