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message 1: by Olivia (new)
Jan 17, 2009 02:46PM

Olivia (livibooks3) Here you can post comments about my story!


message 2: by Izzy (new)
Jan 17, 2009 02:47PM

Izzy (qwertyuiop) | 5 comments Really interesting! I'm not usually interested in books like that, but this was great!


message 3: by Olivia (new)
Jan 17, 2009 03:06PM

Olivia (livibooks3) Cool thanks!


message 4: by Olivia (new)
Jan 17, 2009 03:07PM

Olivia (livibooks3) Anything you think I should change, or?


message 5: by Izzy (new)
Jan 18, 2009 06:33AM

Izzy (qwertyuiop) | 5 comments Maybe u should explain Torran a little more


message 6: by Olivia (new)
Jan 18, 2009 09:16AM

Olivia (livibooks3) Yeah, I plan on doing so later. I am going to add some more chapters, so...


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