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message 1: by Olivia (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) Here you can post comments about my story!

message 2: by Izzy (new)

Izzy (qwertyuiop) | 5 comments Really interesting! I'm not usually interested in books like that, but this was great!

message 3: by Olivia (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) Cool thanks!

message 4: by Olivia (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) Anything you think I should change, or?

message 5: by Izzy (new)

Izzy (qwertyuiop) | 5 comments Maybe u should explain Torran a little more

message 6: by Olivia (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) Yeah, I plan on doing so later. I am going to add some more chapters, so...

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