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message 1: by Danae (new)

Danae (the_secret_writer) | 51 comments Mod
this is where your writing can go it can be a poem a quote a story... anything you want to put here.


message 2: by Samantha Renee (new)

Samantha Renee | 6 comments -Splash-

Splash tears fall
peace never comes
longing it never fades
ashamed of everything in me
slashes on my wrists
heart break as done all this

By: Samantha Renne
written: 1/13/09


message 3: by Danae (new)

Danae (the_secret_writer) | 51 comments Mod
wow that is reallllllyyyy good!



message 4: by Yui (new)

Yui (ilovegrendel) | 19 comments wow...i think i'm crying



message 5: by Samantha Renee (new)

Samantha Renee | 6 comments Thanks Danae. Im glad some people like that poem sorry its kinda sad.


message 6: by Danae (new)

Danae (the_secret_writer) | 51 comments Mod
yeah well writing is a way for you to express yourself


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

That was really sad!!!!!!!


message 8: by Samantha Renee (new)

Samantha Renee | 6 comments I'm sorry it was so sad.


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

It was really good though!


message 10: by Samantha Renee (new)

Samantha Renee | 6 comments Thanks Cryptid :)


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Welcome!


message 12: by Samantha Renee (new)

Samantha Renee | 6 comments I am a wolf
running through the night
with the stars shinning on my back
I am the very stars themselves
lighting up the sky forever
I can touch the moon if i want to
I sing with the sun and wake the world from its sleep

By: Samantha Renee


message 13: by Yui (new)

Yui (ilovegrendel) | 19 comments ooh your poem rocks Samantha


message 14: by Samantha Renee (new)

Samantha Renee | 6 comments Thank you Yui :)


message 15: by Danae (new)

Danae (the_secret_writer) | 51 comments Mod
nice job!


message 16: by Kristin (new)

Kristin E. | 6 comments i have a poem, i was hoping that someone could read it, well here it is.

-Death-
by Kristin E. age:12

Death may be a tragic thing, but no matter what it is bound to happen some day. It, death, is not something to be afraid of, it is natural, it will happen, so live your life, live it to the fullest, love yourself, love to be around others, death will come, but the better you take care of yourself, the later it may come, but you have to be responsible, do your best to get out of bad situations, whether it’s a party gone wrong or just a mishap at the mall, leave or call someone to come get you, or you may be the one encouraging death to make its move.


message 17: by Danae (new)

Danae (the_secret_writer) | 51 comments Mod
wow you are a true poet!


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

You are!


message 19: by Danae (new)

Danae (the_secret_writer) | 51 comments Mod
ummm im not sure what you would call this but its not a poem just so you know.....

Ive never really been one for romance but the thought of one special boy always caused my heart to skip a beat. His eyes were so deep, you could look into them for hours and still find no answers only more questions. The first time i saw him thing that caught my eye was his smile. He seemed like a child who had just gotten his first puppy.
Maybe falling in love was an overstament because who falls in love when there 15? Plus who knows what love really is, there is no way to describe such a feeling. I always thought love was just a myth,maybe i still do.
Love or lust? Is that what i feel,is it lust? He does make me feel like a new person is that what draws me so near to him? Im the kind of girl who looks in the mirror and says "You know if you wern't so ugly you might fit in." Lets face the facts i practicaly loth myself, and he makes me feel beautiful.
I wonder if he can see the "love" or "lust" on my face when i see him. Someone like him shouldn't even be talking to someone like me, I think he deserves so much more. What do I have to offer him, Im not as pretty as the other girls im just plain.
How far will i go for this boy?



message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

Thats cool!


message 21: by Danae (new)

Danae (the_secret_writer) | 51 comments Mod
thanks


message 22: by Kristin (new)

Kristin E. | 6 comments i hope that alot of people liked my poem ☺


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

Part of my poem 'Whole'

And you’re holding my hand
When my world is falling
The pieces tumbling
Falling to the abyss that surrounds me

But finally for once
Forever tonight
I am whole
The abyss slinks slowly away

Cause you keep me whole
You keep me alive
Breathing
Waiting for the next day to come


message 24: by Kristin (new)

Kristin E. | 6 comments wow


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

Wow as in good bad or. . . .


message 26: by Danae (new)

Danae (the_secret_writer) | 51 comments Mod
Gosh thats good. And ummm sorry you did like mine momoko.


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

I liked your Danae it was good!


message 28: by Danae (new)

Danae (the_secret_writer) | 51 comments Mod
aww thanks


message 29: by Danae (new)

Danae (the_secret_writer) | 51 comments Mod
just a question, why dont you like it?


message 30: by Yui (new)

Yui (ilovegrendel) | 19 comments let's try not to say shut up or mean things.. yeah but why do you hate it momoko?


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

Momoko is being really mean. You don't have to say that twice!


message 32: by Danae (new)

Danae (the_secret_writer) | 51 comments Mod
guys its ok i cant exspect everyone to like my writing even some of the most famous writers have people who dont like it...


message 33: by Danae (new)

Danae (the_secret_writer) | 51 comments Mod
umm ok


message 34: by Kristin (new)

Kristin E. | 6 comments wll i thought it was awesome ☺


message 35: by Danae (new)

Danae (the_secret_writer) | 51 comments Mod
aww thanks i glad you liked it


message 36: by Kristin (new)

Kristin E. | 6 comments welcome, lol


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

I like the poem, is the rest of it posted on your writing? If so, I'd read it! O.o


message 38: by Danae (new)

Danae (the_secret_writer) | 51 comments Mod
yeah guys feel free to add you writing


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

Deleted my comment, sorry I was having a bad bad day.

Any how! This is one of my stories:

Pressing her forehead against the bars Blythe breathed in the cold air, trying to taste the freedom in the valley before her.

“You can try you know,” Blythe turned to the soft voice that had come from behind her, she eyed the figure with her surprisingly light eyes. “No one can ever contain a desire of an amazing creature.”


message 40: by Squiggles{Kelly} (new)

Squiggles{Kelly} (squiggles) | 6 comments http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

this story i actually wrote for a contest on The Producers...but I think once the contest is over, i'm going to revise the first paragraph and one or two other things and call it 'A Thousand Things'.

Also, my mom thought the second paragraph was confusing and messed things up for her, so if you could tell me what you think, that would be awesome. Thanks! :D


message 41: by [deleted user] (new)

I thought it was good


message 42: by Squiggles{Kelly} (new)

Squiggles{Kelly} (squiggles) | 6 comments oooh thanks Cryptid! it's actually the first sad story (like, really sad) that i've written...but everybodys been telling me how depressing it was and how the ending made them mad....:P


message 43: by [deleted user] (new)

The ending was good! I thought that it was a great way to end it!


message 44: by Danae (new)

Danae (the_secret_writer) | 51 comments Mod
wow that was pretty awesome!


message 45: by Squiggles{Kelly} (new)

Squiggles{Kelly} (squiggles) | 6 comments aw, thanks!


message 46: by Kristin (new)

Kristin E. | 6 comments wow.


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