Josie's Writing :)

[josie:)]

Hey, I'm new to this group and I wanted to get opinions on my poem, story, or whatever it is. It's about Why I write! Maybe you have read it, maybe not, I posted this in several of my groups but please comment or feel free to give me suggestions! :)

Why I write

I write for interesting meaning and understanding,
I write so people can be effected by my words, not for people to expect happy endings,
I write so I can discover something completely different and original about a subject,
I write what people don't see, feel, or understand.

I write the story that wants to be written

I write so that the musical words could mean something completely original,
I write for the readers to be shocked in a heartbeat, a single thumping,
I write so the arrow can strike right in the center, then burn down the crumbling, black, target.
I write because sorrow doesn't need an ending,

I write because we do.

I write so that the floating angels and burning flames can appear to be the most beautiful thing on earth,
I write because I'm not commonly different,
I write to make sure my soul is still living,
I write with everything inside of me so I can let go of every living fume I've taken in,
I write so that a flower could have a living heartbeat,

I write because there are no limits.

I write so reality could be magic in its own way,
I write to make readers cry of sadness, happiness, and longing.
I write so that a part of me can stand out more powerful
I write to make the most beautiful things, create its inner fire, and make it worth it.
I write to tell people joy and happiness will not always due for justice in reality.

I write to clench at people's hearts and launch them in the gutter,
so that the heart can escape its limits.

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Wow. That was intense...and completely AWESOME!!! Keep up the good work:)
(P.S. You and my sister share the same name:) ))