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message 1: by Eva (new)

Eva King | 1071 comments Hey! I wrote a short story that I really want to send to a magazine, but before I do, could someone give me some feedback?
English isn't my first language so any grammar advice would be very much appreciated.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...


message 2: by Irene (new)

Irene (wingdesilverii) | 2500 comments I took a look and looked at what you asked. Nice job and if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask, because I make mistakes from time to time.


message 3: by Eva (new)

Eva King | 1071 comments Thank you very much for your help. Some of the things you mentioned I kicked mysef for not noticing.


message 4: by Irene (new)

Irene (wingdesilverii) | 2500 comments Eva wrote: "Thank you very much for your help. Some of the things you mentioned I kicked mysef for not noticing."

It's okay, we all make really simple mistakes and then we feel stupid when we miss them.


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