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message 1: by Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (last edited Jun 12, 2012 10:54PM) (new)

Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
This is my first story ever and it was inspired from one of my dreams. COMMENT. Still a work in progress


message 2: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) ;) like it!


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Thank You I think I could work on it


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Any ideas for 5th chapter and sorry their so short


message 5: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) Added stuff:0


message 6: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) I love it!could you check out my writing?Its not best...just ones i came up with. if more people read then ill put my others


message 7: by Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (last edited Jun 13, 2012 05:08PM) (new)

Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments ok I have never been able to write really


message 8: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) thanks!


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments ADDED A CHAPTER AND ADDED A LITTLE BIT MORE DETAIL TO THE OTHER CHAPTERS. More people need to read


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Adding chapter 6 tonight.


message 11: by Christine (new)

Christine Hatfield  (christinesbookshelves) | 31 comments I think you should write a book


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Ok i could not do that and this is for fun and I'm too young to write book.


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Will add chapter 7 tonight.


message 14: by Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (last edited Jun 15, 2012 08:37PM) (new)

Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments I can't believe that people actually think I'm a good writer. My English teacher gave a c on my fictonal narrative and my modernized fairytale. Which made me believe I was a bad writer.


message 15: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) :( u are good


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Added Chapter 7 maybe 1 or two chapters tomorrow.


message 17: by Christine (new)

Christine Hatfield  (christinesbookshelves) | 31 comments Why are you sad caroline?


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Mrs. Effie Mellark wrote: "Ok i could not do that and this is for fun and I'm too young to write book."

Just pointing out that your are sssooo not too young to write a book! I know a twelve-year-old who wrote a book and got it published (which makes me seriously jealous:).


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

I know an eight year old wrote a book and it got published. It wasn't a novel or anything, but it was a book.


message 20: by Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (last edited Jun 16, 2012 09:49AM) (new)

Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments I have always thought of book writers to be in their last years of highschool or older. I'm only going to be in 8th grade next year and I'm almost 13.


Lucy ~Graphite Wizard~ I read the first chapter. Amazing.


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Adding chapter 8 tonight after 5 CA Time.


message 23: by Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (last edited Jun 16, 2012 04:42PM) (new)

Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments I would of written eariler but the chapters are better if I write them later. It's weird but true.


message 24: by Caroline (last edited Jun 16, 2012 06:50PM) (new)

Caroline (godwithus) plse read mine too!thanks!:) she thinks shes not good and she is


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Added chapter 8. Are you talking in 3rd person Caroline.


message 26: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) What?I was responding to there ?


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Caroline [Who paints the day] wrote: "What?I was responding to there ?"

My thing? If so I tried to write chapter 8 eariler it turned out worse then this.


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Added chapter 9..


message 29: by Christine (new)

Christine Hatfield  (christinesbookshelves) | 31 comments Yeah i think you should add chapter 9


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments I have added chapter 9.


message 31: by Christine (new)

Christine Hatfield  (christinesbookshelves) | 31 comments Oh alright sorry


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments It's o tay (okay)


message 33: by Christine (new)

Christine Hatfield  (christinesbookshelves) | 31 comments I'm going to read your chapter soon


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Thank you it is actually one of the chapters I like.


message 35: by Christine (new)

Christine Hatfield  (christinesbookshelves) | 31 comments Your welcome

are you thinking about writing a book?


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Maybe I need to find time and parents don't even know I'm writing this so I can't be like oh I want to write a book to them.


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Read chapter 9 and comment please that one took a long time because I had to research somethings


message 38: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) ahhhh


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Added chapter 10 pretty boring basically a transition chapter.


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Added chapter 11.


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Added part of the epilogue going to be 2 parts or more


message 43: by Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (last edited Jun 19, 2012 02:08PM) (new)

Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments *screaming and pulling my hair* People use smileys too much! Sorry


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments I o tay you're not the only one.


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Cassidy who is scared out of her mind because she wrote: "Yea"

Love your new name


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments Added 2nd part of epilogue


message 47: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid great


message 48: by Christine (new)

Christine Hatfield  (christinesbookshelves) | 31 comments That's great


Love Music 4ever Mrs.Effie Fuentes (loveptv4ever) | 49 comments The story is done. :*( *crying in my head* I will do some research before the next one is up. so it might be one or two days before the next.


message 50: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) Lol, i use smileys too much:p


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