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Do you ever get tired of being tripped up on your road?
I’m always being tripped up,
My road seems to go to no where,
Because no one gives me a chance to get somewhere.

Nobody joins me on my road,
People stay on their roads, with their friends,
I walk alone, just as I have always done, I can’t escape from that,
It’s a fact that I was born to walk alone.

Don’t try to help me, I don’t need help,
Don’t try to talk to me, I don’t need a conversation.
Don’t try to join me, I am alone but not lonely,
Just leave me be, I will find my way.

Slowly my path is beginning to make sense,
But it is still only wide enough for one person,
It is still in the dark but some light is shining through,
Leave me to walk alone; it’s the only way for you to help me really.

This may make me sound really depressed but I promise that I'm not, I'm just socially awkward.

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You push me down, because you think I won’t get up,
You beat me up, because you think I won’t fight back,
You call me names, because you think I will let you,
You mess with my head, because you think that it will be easy,
You never thought that I would pick myself back up,
You never imagined that I would fight against you,
You did it because I thought that I was weak,
You don’t know me if you thought those things.

This is for those who get bullied, don't sink down to their level, but don't let them break you.

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Why? Because you think that you are better than me,
You think you are smarter, funnier, more talented,
You make me doubt myself,
You think that you are more beautiful,
You rub my face in the dust,
But you will always be ugly,
Your actions show through your mask,
I could never do that to anyone,
So I will always shine like a thousand stars,
Go on, try to throw that in my face, I dare you.

Another one about being bullied.

message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

You killed my spirit,
You broke my heart,
I hope that the next girl doesn’t fall,
As easily as I did,
I never even saw it coming,
But I will love again,
I can’t wait until you come crawling back,
When you are on your hands and knees,
Begging me for one more chance,
I won’t make you burn,
You are just another shadow in my past now,
But I will forever carry the scars,
You will give up on your games someday,
When you do then come around,
We can talk it out,
We can love again.

For those who have a broken heart.

message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Wow, Becky. That's...You're an amazing author/poet. I really wish I could write like that. But most of my good writing is in books. I wish I had one of your poems for a book I'm writing now. it's about a girl who's being bullied and loves reading poetry. Now get one of your poems published and let me use it in my book:)

message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Thank you, that would be amazing to have one of my poems in your book! I'm sure that your book is amazing!

message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah, amazing...probably not. My work is more of a work in progress and I have trouble ever actually finishing my books. usually because I get this great idea for a new book. This year I'm trying to finish at least one book, though. Cross your fingers ;)

message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

I'm sure that you'll manage it! I have trouble starting a book but once I get an idea then it's fine. XD

message 9: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) I love these,really describing peoples lifes!I like the first one alot. Deep,but in a good way

message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks, I've always been alone, my friends say that they will always be there for me but no matter how much they try it's impossible, I've learnt to look out for myself and I don't need anyone in my life, I just want people in my life, it makes my journey more bearable.

message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Tonight I cry,
Tonight I smile,
Tonight I think only of you,
Tonight we are here,
Together with only each other,
I think of nothing else,
Tonight we talk and smile,
Tonight I speak to you,
From here on earth,
I hope that you hear,
From where ever you are,
You’re in a better place,
No pain or suffering,
But please remember,
That I love you.

message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

Man Becky, you had me tearing up, 'cus I was thinking of my grandpa.

message 13: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) :)

message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

I was thinking of my Grandma when I wrote it, thanks!

message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

They save our lives everyday,
But you don’t care,
They protect innocent people,
But you can’t see that,
All you can see is the lives that are lost,
The families broken,
You don’t know what it might be like,
Most of us don’t,
They are our heroes,
The ones who died with their heads held high,
Because they fought to protect,
Their names will live on,
We will remember our heroes.

For the soldiers who are fighting or have died fighting, their memory will live.

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message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Everyone makes mistakes,
Big or small, these things happen,
Some cause heart aches,
Others mess with your mind,

No one can avoid them,
You just have to take it,
Think of it like a gem,
Each makes you shine brighter,

Just remember this,
It all gets better,
They are learning that you can’t afford to miss,
What doesn’t break you makes you stronger,
Be strong.

message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

I dare you,
To smile like you have never been sad,
I dare you,
To laugh like everything is a joke,
I dare you,
To love like no one will hurt you,
I dare you,
To jump like you can touch the stars,
I dare you,
To run like you will never tire,
I dare you,
To be what you are like you’ll never be judged.
I dare you,
To live like you will die tomorrow,
Go on, live your life. I dare you.

message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

Becky, you just keep surprising me. I love your last one. I'm serious, you should totally try getting one of your poems published in a magazine, or the newspaper, or something.

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message 22: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) This are really great. like a deep kind that brings me out

message 23: by ThePsychopath∞ (new)

ThePsychopath∞ | 23 comments Wow Becky! You could've told me you were such a good writer. These are... Well I was going to say amazing but they're better than that. Keep writing these and I'll keep supporting.

message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks again everyone!

message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

Music is the thing that I love the most,
Music is my undeniable passion,
Music is the one place where I shine,
Music is what takes me to a different world,
Music is my only freedom,
Music is the thing that I love the most.

message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

We have never seen each other,
We met on a website for book worms,
We started to talk a bit,
We learned more about each other,
We supported each other,
We talked for hours,
We began to feel something,
It took us a while but we get it now,
We aren’t sure but it may be real,
We may be in love.

message 27: by ThePsychopath∞ (new)

ThePsychopath∞ | 23 comments These are so amazing I don't know what to say.... There's one sentence for it :

Better than angelic

message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

Thank you!

message 29: by ThePsychopath∞ (new)

ThePsychopath∞ | 23 comments Your welcome :)

message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

I don’t know what I want,
And I don’t know how to find it,
I think that I need someone,
A special person to hold,
Someone who will come with me,
No matter what,
I don’t know if I have found them
But I think I have,
I guess I will find what I want,
But I can’t without them by my side.

message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

Love it Becky:)

message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

Pretty lights shine in the dark,
Strung through the fields and trees,
Friends and lovers talk and laugh,
I stand on the outside looking in,
Someone catches my eye,
They start to walk over and the world melts away,
It’s just you and me,
We meet for the first time,
And fall in love,
There’s no way out now,
A miracle happened that midsummer night,
We danced beneath the stars,
Talked for hours and learnt about each other,
I don’t know what comes next,
But I hope that you will be in my future,
Because I’ve never known anyone like you,
You’re special, and I hope that you’re mine.

This is a long one!

message 33: by ThePsychopath∞ (new)

ThePsychopath∞ | 23 comments Lovely :)

message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks ;)

message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

You’re the only one who,
Makes me cry when you say you have to go,
Makes me laugh when you say silly things,
Makes me feel like everything is okay,
Makes me glad that I am who I am,
Makes life a confused mess,
Makes my mind a whirlpool of emotion,
Makes me a wreck for all the good reasons,
Makes me be myself,
You’re the only one who I love.

message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

How could we have never met?
We know so much, yet so little,
We make each other laugh,
We make each other cry,
We have become each others life line,
We have fallen so deep,
And only one thing stands in the way,
The awkwardly relevant yet irrelevant fact,
That we have never met.

message 37: by ThePsychopath∞ (new)

ThePsychopath∞ | 23 comments Where do you come up with these ideas? They're amazing :)

message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

I think you know what my inspiration is ;)

message 39: by ThePsychopath∞ (new)

ThePsychopath∞ | 23 comments :) I've been writing more poems since yesterday. I'm just improving them a little and then I'll add them on SOS I think.

message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

How could I have strayed so far?
I was on my dark little path before,
But something came along,
And shined light on me,
The only thing that I want,
Right by my side no matter what,
This thing has made me stop,
Then spun me around and around,
Now I don’t know where I need to go,
The thing cannot help me,
Because it is as lost as I am,
But we can work together,
And pick a direction to take,
We can take it together,
And get lost together,
Because this mysterious thing,
Is the love that someone feels for me,
And the love that I feel for them

That's great Callum! Just keep writing and I'll keep supporting ;)

message 41: by ThePsychopath∞ (new)

ThePsychopath∞ | 23 comments These are all amazing. Keep writing :D

message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

I have become so confused,
Nothing really makes sense,
I am feeling so much,
After being so numb,
I don’t know what to think,
Or do or say,
But one thing is clear,
That I love you.


message 43: by Caroline (new)

Caroline (godwithus) ;)

message 44: by ThePsychopath∞ (new)

ThePsychopath∞ | 23 comments These are really good Becky :)

message 45: by [deleted user] (new)

We haven't known each other that long,
But we have become so close,
You told me that you wouldn't leave,
And you meant it,
But your dream has come around,
A dangerous thing that you want so bad,
You may get badly hurt or even killed,
Then I would lose you forever,
After such a short time you may go,
But I won't stop you following your dreams,
Even if it means that you go to war.

message 46: by [deleted user] (new)

I don’t want to live without you,
I don’t want to go back to black and white,
You brought colour to my life,
Made me see so much that I never did before,
I need you by my side to be myself,
I don’t want to fly if you’re still on the ground,
Because it wouldn’t be the same,
I never had anyone like you before,
And now I can’t live without you.

message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

I love the way,
You fight for Wales with such spirit,
We argue about which country is best,
We talk about my strange best friend,
I complain about the teachers at school,
You make jokes that cause a laughing fit,
We say things that bring tears to my eyes,
We fall for each other but are scared to admit it,
You finaly tell me and I sit there in shock,
And then I start to cry tears of pure joy,
Because I feel the same way about you,
I love all of this and much much more.

message 48: by [deleted user] (new)

When you have found everything that you looked for,
I hope that you come back to me,
Come and stand all day and night at my door,
Until I came along and found you there,
Would you remember me and come back for more,
Or would you leave the memory of me behind,
Would you call to me and say words to make my heart soar,
And sleep on the front step until day break,
Would you wrap me in your arms and sit with me on the floor,
And stroke my hair all night long,
Would you be my prince charming and create a fairytale,
And make me the only girl in your world.

message 49: by ThePsychopath∞ (new)

ThePsychopath∞ | 23 comments ;) I think anyone from S.O.S would know who you're talking about by now :P

message 50: by [deleted user] (new)

Maybe! Do you know? ;)

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